Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and complete your sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., "both kinds of music" not "both of the music").

예시: I enjoy both happy and sad music depending on the situation. For example, when I’m feeling reflective I listen to sad songs to process my thoughts, but when I need energy or motivation I choose upbeat tracks because they lift my mood and increase my confidence.

제안: Give a direct answer, then explain briefly with a specific reason or short example. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundant phrases like "helps to me to" or "as much."

예시: Yes, definitely. Happy music makes me feel more excited because the fast tempo and cheerful lyrics lift my spirits; for instance, I often play upbeat songs before exercising to feel more energetic.

제안: Answer directly in the present perfect or simple past where appropriate, then add a clear supporting detail. Avoid repetition ("I I") and use more precise language such as "I haven't taken" and "I read lyrics or follow along".

예시: No, I haven't taken any formal music classes, but in my free time I often read song lyrics and follow tutorials online to learn more about the songs I like.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific example of multitasking with music. Fix grammar ("I don't feel bored," "when I am doing tasks") and avoid repeating the same idea twice ("enhance and boost").

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while studying or cooking. For instance, I play instrumental or lo-fi tracks while studying because they help me concentrate and prevent boredom.

× I prefer both of the music according to the situation.

✓ I prefer both kinds of music depending on the situation.

'both of the music' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun; use 'kinds of music' or simply 'both' with a countable noun. Also 'according to the situation' is awkward; 'depending on the situation' is more natural.

× Whenever I fail, I prefer to.

✓ Whenever I fail, I prefer sad music.

The sentence ends with an incomplete verb phrase 'prefer to' without an object, making it a sentence structure error. Provide the object 'sad music' to complete the meaning.

× Whenever I feel low, I prefer to listen to the happy music because it helps to enhance my mood and boost my confidence level.

✓ Whenever I feel low, I prefer to listen to happy music because it helps enhance my mood and boost my confidence.

'the happy music' is unnatural here; 'happy music' (no article) is better. 'helps to enhance' can be 'helps enhance' (both are acceptable). 'boost my confidence level' is wordy; 'boost my confidence' is more natural.

× Whenever I I feel somewhat slow or have.

✓ Whenever I feel somewhat down or slow, or have low energy, I listen to music.

The original is incomplete and contains repetition 'I I' and a sentence fragment 'or have.' Complete the thought by specifying 'have low energy' and providing a main clause 'I listen to music.'

× Happy music make me feel more excited because it helps to me to enhance my mood as much and boost my confidence level.

✓ Happy music makes me feel more excited because it helps me enhance my mood and boost my confidence.

'music' is a singular uncountable noun so the verb should be 'makes' (third person singular). Remove the extra 'to' after 'helps' and use 'helps me enhance' or 'helps me to enhance'; 'as much' is unnecessary and unnatural here. Simplify 'boost my confidence level' to 'boost my confidence.'

× No, I don't take any kind of music classes, but when I I am free I try to listen the lyrics of the music on my mobile phone.

✓ No, I don't take any music classes, but when I am free I try to listen to the lyrics of songs on my mobile phone.

'don't take any kind of music classes' is wordy; 'any music classes' is better. Remove duplicated 'I'. Use 'listen to' not 'listen' alone, and 'lyrics of songs' is more natural than 'lyrics of the music.'

× I listen to music while doing other things because it helps to enhance and boost my confidence level and I am not feel boring whenever I doing a variety of task.

✓ I listen to music while doing other things because it helps enhance and boost my confidence, and I don't feel bored when I am doing a variety of tasks.

'helps to enhance' -> 'helps enhance' is more natural. 'I am not feel boring' is incorrect: use 'I don't feel bored.' 'whenever I doing' lacks auxiliary verb; use 'when I am doing.' 'a variety of task' should be plural 'a variety of tasks.'