Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn trả lời đúng trọng tâm và ý tưởng rõ ràng, nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp, trật tự từ và tránh lặp từ; câu nên ngắn gọn hơn (không quá 5 câu) và thêm liên từ phù hợp khi cần mở rộng ý. Cụ thể: sửa lỗi như “whenever feel I feel down” → “whenever I feel down”, “epic songs boost” → “epic songs boost” (thêm ‘s’ hoặc chỉnh dạng), và thay “gives me extra motivation” bằng “give me extra motivation” để phù hợp với chủ ngữ. Ngoài ra có thể nêu một ví dụ cụ thể về thể loại hoặc nghệ sĩ để làm nội dung cụ thể hơn.

예시: I prefer happy music because it uplifts my mood when I feel down. For example, upbeat pop songs by artists like Dua Lipa boost my energy and give me extra motivation to keep going.

제안: Ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp làm giảm tự nhiên: cụm “fatter tempo” không đúng — nên dùng “faster tempo” hoặc “faster beat”; “leave my mood” vô nghĩa — có thể là “lift my mood”; “when I board” không rõ ngữ cảnh (boarding a plane?) và “Avid playlist” có vẻ là tên riêng sai hoặc cần giải thích. Hãy dùng từ chính xác, tránh từ mơ hồ, và giữ câu súc tích (1–3 câu).

예시: Yes, upbeat music makes me feel more excited because it usually has a faster tempo and catchy melodies that lift my mood. For example, when I commute to work I play an energetic playlist to boost my energy and focus.

제안: Nội dung hợp lý nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ không chính xác: “took my music classes” nên là “I took music classes”; “part of their curriculum” nên là “part of the curriculum” hoặc “part of the school curriculum”; “extra curriculum activities” → “extracurricular activities”; “I enjoyed to learn” → “I enjoyed learning”. Sắp xếp câu để trực tiếp trả lời rồi bổ sung chi tiết, tối đa 3 câu.

예시: Yes, I took music classes at primary and high school. They were part of the school curriculum and also offered as extracurricular activities, so I enjoyed learning basic singing and music theory.

제안: Ý tốt nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác: tránh lặp từ (“other things”), sửa “finish a test a task quickly” → “finish a task quickly” hoặc nêu rõ “exam”; cụm “gives my pace up” sai — nên là “speeds me up” hoặc “keeps up my pace”. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về loại nhạc hoặc playlist.

예시: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things because it energizes me and helps me stay motivated. For example, I play an upbeat playlist when I exercise or when I need to finish a task quickly, which helps me focus and maintain my pace.

× Well, I usually prefer happy music because it uplifts my mood whenever feel I feel down.

✓ Well, I usually prefer happy music because it uplifts my mood whenever I feel down.

Incorrect word order and missing subject before 'feel'. Insert 'I' before 'feel' and correct order to 'whenever I feel down' to form a grammatical adverbial clause. Use present simple 'feel' for habitual situations.

× Listening to epic songs boost my energy and gives me extra motivation to keep going.

✓ Listening to epic songs boosts my energy and gives me extra motivation to keep going.

Subject-verb agreement error with a gerund phrase as subject. 'Listening to epic songs' is a singular subject, so the verb should be 'boosts'. Also 'gives' remains third singular to match.

× Yes, upbeat music definitely makes me feel more excited because it usually has a fatter tempo and catchy melodies that leave my mood.

✓ Yes, upbeat music definitely makes me feel more excited because it usually has a faster tempo and catchy melodies that lift my mood.

Wrong adjective 'fatter' and wrong verb 'leave' for intended meaning. Use 'faster tempo' (comparative of 'fast') and 'lift my mood' (common collocation) in present simple for general statements.

× For example, when I board, I often turn on my Avid playlist to boost my energy and be more motivated.

✓ For example, when I travel by plane, I often turn on my avid playlist to boost my energy and feel more motivated.

Ambiguous phrase 'when I board' is incomplete; specify 'when I travel by plane' or 'when I board a plane'. 'Be more motivated' is awkward; use 'feel more motivated'. Also 'Avid' likely not proper noun here; use lowercase 'avid' if adjective.

× Yes, I took my music classes at primary school and later at high school.

✓ Yes, I took music classes at primary school and later at high school.

Unnecessary possessive 'my' before 'music classes' in this context. General statement about schooling omits 'my'. Also 'primary school' and 'high school' are correct without articles in general statements.

× They were part of their curriculum and also offered as a extra curriculum activities so I enjoyed to learn basic singing and music theory.

✓ They were part of the curriculum and were also offered as extracurricular activities, so I enjoyed learning basic singing and music theory.

Use 'the curriculum' for the school's curriculum and 'extracurricular activities' as one word; remove 'a' before plural 'activities'. 'Enjoyed to learn' is incorrect; use 'enjoyed learning' (gerund after 'enjoy').

× I often listen to music while doing other things because it energizes me and helps me to stay motivated.

✓ I often listen to music while doing other things because it energizes me and helps me stay motivated.

Minor style: 'helps me to stay' is acceptable, but 'helps me stay' is more natural. No tense change needed; keep present simple for habitual action.

× For example, I usually play a playlist when I exercise and when I need to finish a test a task quickly, which helps me focus and gives my pace up.

✓ For example, I usually play a playlist when I exercise and when I need to finish a task quickly, which helps me focus and pick up my pace.

Redundant 'a test a task' corrected to 'a task'. 'Gives my pace up' is ungrammatical; use 'pick up my pace' (common phrasal verb). Maintain present simple for habitual actions.