Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap net ama dilbilgisi ve akıcılık geliştirilmelidir. Tek cümlede fazlaca tekrar ve yanlış kelime kullanımı var ("really really stress" yanlış). 1) Konu cümlesini koru: tercihini açıkça söylemeye devam et. 2) Fiil uyumunu düzelt: "it helps me relax" gibi ifadeler kullan. 3) Gereksiz tekrarları çıkar ve maksimum 3–4 kısa cümleyle destekleyici detay ver. 4) Bağlaç/bağlayıcı kullan: "because" veya "when" ile nedenini bağla. Örnek pratik: gerçekçi sebep ve kısa örnek ekle.

예시: I prefer happy music because it boosts my mood after a long day. For example, upbeat songs help me feel more energetic and help me relax while I cook or exercise.

제안: Cevap olumlu fakat dilbilgisi, akıcılık ve doğal ifade zayıf. 1) Konu cümlesiyle başlayıp destekle: "Yes, it does" ardından nedenini açıkla. 2) Yardımcı fiil ve kelime sırası hatalarını düzelt: "It not only makes me excited but also relieves my stress." 3) Gereksiz tekrarları çıkar ve daha spesifik örnek ver (hangi tür şarkılar, hangi durumlarda). 4) Cümleleri 2–3 kısa cümlede sınırla ve bağlaç kullan: "because", "so", "for example" gibi. Örnek pratik verildi.

예시: Yes, it does. It not only makes me feel excited but also helps me relieve stress after a hard day. For example, upbeat pop songs lift my energy when I need motivation to cook or exercise.

× I definitely prefer happy music to boost my mood, it really really stress and unwind me after a hectic working day.

✓ I definitely prefer happy music to boost my mood; it really helps me relax and unwind after a hectic working day.

The original uses the base verb 'stress' incorrectly where a verb with 'helps' and an infinitive or participle is required. Change 'stress' to 'helps me relax' to convey that the music reduces stress. Also add a semicolon or separate sentences because the original is a comma splice. Use 'relax' rather than 'stress' and remove the repeated 'really'. Suggestions: use a semicolon or two sentences to fix the run-on, use 'helps me relax' or 'relieves my stress', and avoid repeating 'really'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, definitely. Not only makes me excited but also relieves stress after a grueling day.

✓ Yes, definitely. Not only does it make me excited, but it also relieves stress after a grueling day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order for a 'not only... but also' structure and lacks the subject and auxiliary verb 'does' for inversion. In English, when starting with 'Not only' you must invert the auxiliary and subject: 'Not only does it make me...' Also include the pronoun 'it' to refer to 'happy music'. Grammar problem type ID:26},{