Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity, keep answer concise (max 5 sentences), use a clear topic sentence and specific reasons with linking words. For example, correct verb forms and add a contrast word to explain both preferences. Also include a short example to make it more specific.

예시: I prefer happy music because it helps me relax and relieves stress. However, I often listen to sad songs when I want to reflect on personal memories, because their lyrics match my emotions. For instance, I play a sad ballad when I am thinking about a past relationship, which helps me process my feelings.

제안: Correct sentence structure and use linking words to expand briefly. Provide a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details (how it affects you and when), and a short example. Avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited and energetic. For example, I listen to upbeat pop or dance tracks in the morning to boost my mood and focus for the day, which helps me handle a busy schedule more positively.

× I prefer happy music because it relieve our stress but usually I listen sad songs because it is attached with my emotions.

✓ I prefer happy music because it relieves our stress, but usually I listen to sad songs because they are connected to my emotions.

The verb 'relieve' needs third person singular form 'relieves' to agree with subject 'it' (or more clearly 'happy music'); this is a subject-verb agreement/third person singular issue. 'Listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by a noun phrase, so 'listen sad songs' should be 'listen to sad songs' (preposition error, handled because it fits list item 11 but only correct per instruction 2). 'It is attached with my emotions' is unnatural and mismatches plural 'songs'—use 'they are connected to my emotions' for correct pronoun agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular subjects by adding -s in present simple and use 'listen to' with objects; match pronouns to their antecedents and prefer 'connected to' instead of 'attached with.'

× Yes, of course happy music feels me excited and it relieves stress of my everyday schedule.

✓ Yes, of course happy music makes me feel excited, and it relieves the stress of my everyday schedule.

The structure 'feels me excited' is incorrect; English uses 'make/makes someone feel [adjective]' to express causing an emotion, so use 'makes me feel excited' which is a verb + object + bare infinitive pattern rather than verb + -ing. 'Relieves stress of my everyday schedule' needs a definite article 'the' before 'stress' to be natural. Suggestion: use 'make/makes someone feel' for causing feelings and add articles where required; keep verb forms appropriate (bare infinitive after 'make').