Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should give a direct, natural response (one topic sentence) and then one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and be specific about your preference and reasons. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me concentrate when I work. For example, upbeat pop or funk songs make me feel energetic, so I often listen to them while exercising or studying.

제안: Again, you repeated the examiner instead of answering. Respond directly with a clear yes/no or short opinion, then add a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because", "so", or "for example" to connect ideas and keep the answer concise.

예시: Yes, happy music usually makes me feel more excited because of its fast tempo and positive lyrics. For example, when I hear lively dance tracks, I feel motivated to move and my energy levels go up.

× Do you prefer sad or happy music?

✓ I prefer happy music.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question instead of answering; this is a sentence structure and pragmatic error (categorized as 'Sentence structure errors' per list). The student should produce a declarative sentence that directly answers the question. Use first person subject 'I' plus present simple verb 'prefer' and the chosen option 'happy music'. For clearer responses, include a brief reason: 'I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood.'

× Does happy music make you feel more excited?

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited.

The student's reply repeats the examiner's question rather than answering; this is a sentence structure/pragmatic error. To answer a yes/no question in the present simple, use 'Yes' or 'No' followed by a full clause: subject 'happy music' + verb 'makes' (third person singular) + object 'me' + complement 'feel more excited'. This provides a grammatically correct and complete response.