Music— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
수험생
I prefer happy music because I am a positive person. I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs because I think she has a beautiful voice.
시험관
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
수험생
Yes, I think music makes me excited. I love music. When I feel tired, I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs. That makes me feel happy.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you prefer sad or happy music?
점수: 78.0제안: 回答は自然で直接的ですが、発展のためには理由や具体例をもう少し加え、接続詞を使って文の流れを明確にするとよいです。例えば“because”以外に“for example”や“also”を使い、なぜその歌手が好きなのか（メロディ、歌詞、リズムなど）を具体的に述べると説得力が増します。また文の長さは3〜4文に収め、冗長な表現を避けてください。発音や語彙は一般的に適切ですが、“positive person”という表現は少し抽象的なので“optimistic”や“cheerful”といった語も検討しましょう。
예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay motivated. For example, I often listen to Ariana Grande because her songs have catchy melodies and upbeat rhythms. Also, her clear vocal tone and positive lyrics make me feel energetic and cheerful.
Does happy music make you feel more excited?
점수: 72.0제안: 回答は率直ですが、繰り返しが多くやや単調です。よりコヒーレントにするために接続詞（for example, therefore, when）を使い、原因と結果を明確に示すと良いです。具体性を増すために、どのように気分が変わるのか（エネルギーが出る、集中できる、リラックスできる等）や、どの曲や歌の特徴が効くのかを一文で述べると説得力が上がります。回答は3文程度でまとめ、同義反復を避けてください。
예시: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited because it boosts my energy levels. For instance, when I’m tired I listen to upbeat Ariana Grande songs with fast tempos and lively choruses, and they help me feel more awake and motivated. As a result, I can focus better and enjoy my day more.
문법
× I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs because I think she has a beautiful voice.
✓ I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs because I think she has a beautiful voice.
No grammatical error related to third person singular. The verb forms are correct for first person 'I' and third person 'she'. Keep as is.
× Yes, I think music makes me excited.
✓ Yes, I think music makes me excited.
Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense. 'Music makes me excited' correctly uses present simple to express a general truth. No change needed.
× I love music.
✓ I love music.
This is a correct present simple sentence expressing a general preference. No correction necessary.
× When I feel tired, I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs.
✓ When I feel tired, I often listen to Ariana Grande's songs.
This sentence correctly uses present simple for habitual action after a time clause. No correction necessary.
× That makes me feel happy.
✓ That makes me feel happy.
Correct use of present simple to describe a regular effect. No correction necessary.
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