Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接但过于简短，没有展开理由或细节。建议在给出观点后添加一到两个支持细节（如原因、个人经历或举例），并使用连接词使表述更连贯。保持句子自然、不过于冗长，最好控制在3-5句内。

예시: I prefer sad music because it helps me reflect and relax after a long day. For example, when I’m stressed from work, slow acoustic songs calm my thoughts and let me focus on my emotions. Moreover, sad tunes often have meaningful lyrics that I can relate to.

제안: 回答清晰但太简短，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议在肯定回答后说明程度、场景或举例，使用连接词如“because”或“for example”来丰富内容，使回答更有说服力。

예시: Yes, happy music can make me feel excited because upbeat rhythms and lively melodies boost my energy. For instance, when I listen to pop songs before exercising, I feel more motivated and upbeat. Also, upbeat music often lifts my mood when I’m meeting friends.

× I prefer sad music.

✓ I prefer sad music.

该句语法正确。动词prefer与宾语sad music搭配正确，时态和主谓一致无误。

× Yes, happy music can make me feel excited.

✓ Yes, happy music can make me feel excited.

该句语法正确。情态动词can后接动词原形make，结构和时态都符合语境。