Music— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the sentence grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundant words. For example, say you prefer happy music and briefly state why. Use correct article use and comparative structure.

예시: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay motivated. For instance, upbeat songs energize me when I exercise or work.

제안: Organize your answer with a topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, pronouns, and articles). Be specific about how happy music affects you and give a short example. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, happy music makes me feel more excited because upbeat rhythms improve my mood and increase my focus. For example, when I listen to energetic pop or dance tracks while working, I feel more motivated and energized, so I complete tasks faster.

× I prefer happy music than a sad music.

✓ I prefer happy music to sad music.

This sentence uses an incorrect comparative structure. Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than Y'; also 'a sad music' is incorrect because 'music' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer happy music to sad music.' Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, happy music make me excited because upbeat songs life in my mood help me to focus when I'm working and I will listen it it will goes cheerful and dance track it feel energized.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me excited because upbeat songs lift my mood and help me focus when I'm working. When I listen to them, they make me feel cheerful and energized.

There are several grammatical issues here: subject-verb agreement ('happy music' and 'upbeat songs' require 'makes' and 'lift' respectively), incorrect verb choice ('life' should be 'lift'), incorrect pronoun/reference ('listen it' should be 'listen to them'), incorrect verb forms ('will goes' and 'it feel' are wrong), and run-on sentence structure. Corrections: use 'makes' for singular subject, 'lift' for plural, 'help me focus' (no 'to'), 'listen to them' for plural 'songs', and present simple to match the general statement: 'they make me feel cheerful and energized.' Grammar problem type ID:27