Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details (why you liked her) using linking words. Avoid redundancy and past-tense inconsistencies.

예시: Yes, my favourite teacher was Sanchita, my science teacher. She explained difficult ideas very clearly and used interesting experiments, so I always understood the topics and enjoyed class.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for example, moreover, because) and give one concrete example of how teaching would help you develop a skill.

예시: Yes, I would like to become a teacher in the future because I enjoy learning and sharing knowledge. Moreover, teaching would help me improve my communication skills by explaining concepts to students and answering their questions.

제안: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, tense) and avoid filler words. Provide one specific memory or example of what made her memorable and use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I remember my teacher Rubina, who taught English and maths. She always gave clear examples and helped us with difficult problems, so I still follow her on Instagram to see her teaching tips.

제안: Keep the answer natural and concise. Use a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason or example of how you stay in touch or benefit from them, using linking words like because or so.

예시: Yes, I keep in touch with my primary teachers on social media. For example, I follow Rubina on Instagram and Facebook because she shares helpful lessons and resources from her online classes.

제안: Use concise sentences and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement, then give two specific ways she helped (for example, explaining doubts and providing materials) linked coherently.

예시: My favourite teacher Rubina supported me in many ways: she patiently explained my doubts and gave me books and notes for exam preparation, and she encouraged me to work harder.

제안: Avoid vague repetition and be more specific about why you prefer them. Use linking words (for example, because, moreover) and correct verb forms. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were patient and provided extra classes when we struggled. Moreover, they offered personalised help during exam preparation, which made learning easier for me.

× Her name is Sanchita, she was my science teacher and she had a good knowledge about her topics.

✓ Her name is Sanchita; she was my science teacher and she had good knowledge of her subjects.

Use of prepositions: 'knowledge about' is non-idiomatic here; native usage is 'knowledge of'. Also 'topics' is better as 'subjects' in this context. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses rather than a comma splice.

× Yes, I would like to become one teacher in the future because I enjoy learning new things and enjoy sharing my knowledge with others.

✓ Yes, I would like to become a teacher in the future because I enjoy learning new things and sharing my knowledge with others.

Article error: 'one teacher' should be 'a teacher' for an unspecified profession. Also 'and enjoy' is redundant after 'because'—streamline to 'and sharing' to parallel 'enjoy learning'.

× On other hand, I can gain new experience and can develop my communication skill through teaching and through this.

✓ On the other hand, I can gain new experience and develop my communication skills through teaching.

Missing article: 'On other hand' should be 'On the other hand'. Modal redundancy: use 'can' once; remove repetition. 'Communication skill' should be plural 'communication skills'. Remove 'and through this' as unnecessary.

× Yes, I still remember one of my teacher, her name is Rubina, she taught us English and math.

✓ Yes, I still remember one of my teachers; her name is Rubina; she taught us English and math.

Singular/plural: 'one of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also punctuation: avoid comma splices by using semicolons or separate sentences.

× She know her subject very well and she always give examples and clear our doubts.

✓ She knows her subjects very well and she always gives examples and clears our doubts.

Third person singular verbs require an -s: 'know' -> 'knows', 'give' -> 'gives', 'clear' -> 'clears'. Also 'subject' pluralized to 'subjects' to match context.

× I uh, I follow her on Instagram to.

✓ I, uh, I follow her on Instagram too.

Pronoun/word choice: 'to' is incorrect here; use 'too' meaning 'also'. Keep filler 'uh' separated by commas.

× I check her post and resources because she used to give online classes and I still gain knowledge through her teachings.

✓ I check her posts and resources because she used to give online classes and I still gain knowledge from her teaching.

Plural form: 'post' -> 'posts' and preposition: 'through her teachings' is awkward; 'from her teaching' or 'from her lessons' is more natural. 'Used to give' is acceptable for past habit.

× My favorite teacher Rubina always helped me during my schooling time and she always clear cleared my doubts and she used to give me books and notes whenever I needed them in my examination.

✓ My favorite teacher, Rubina, always helped me during my schooling and she always cleared my doubts; she used to give me books and notes whenever I needed them for my examinations.

Adverb/adjective and verb form: 'schooling time' is awkward—use 'schooling' or 'time at school'. 'clear cleared' has duplicated words; correct verb is past 'cleared'. Use 'for my examinations' rather than 'in my examination'.

× She always encouraged me.

✓ She always encouraged me.

This sentence is correct as written; no grammatical change needed. It fits past-tense narrative so no correction required.

× Yes, I like my primary school teachers more than my higher school teachers because they were good, they had good experience and knowledge, they always clear our doubts and gives extra classes when we need that and always help us during our examination preparation prep.

✓ Yes, I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were good; they had experience and knowledge; they always cleared our doubts, gave extra classes when we needed them, and helped us during our exam preparation.

Adjective/adverb and verb tense: 'higher school' is nonstandard—use 'high school'. Verb forms should match past tense: 'clear'->'cleared', 'gives'->'gave', 'help'->'helped'. Remove redundancy 'preparation prep' and use plural 'exams' or 'exam preparation'. Improve punctuation to avoid run-on sentence.