Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g., "friendly, gentle and helpful" repeated).

예시: No, I don't have a single favorite teacher. However, most of my teachers have been very friendly and helpful, for example my math teacher always stayed after class to explain difficult problems.

제안: Improve word choice and sentence structure: give a clear reason with specific details and link ideas smoothly. Replace awkward phrases like "telling and demanding" and "emotion energy" with natural expressions.

예시: Not really. Teaching seems very demanding and emotionally draining because managing a classroom takes a lot of patience and energy, so I would prefer an office-based job where the schedule is more predictable.

제안: Be specific and avoid overgeneralization. Start with a topic sentence naming a particular memorable teacher, then provide one or two specific memories. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and keep it concise.

예시: Yes. I particularly remember my elementary school art teacher, who encouraged my creativity by giving me extra materials and praising my drawings, which made me more confident.

제안: Correct factual wording and make the explanation clearer and concise. Avoid absolute claims like "illegal" unless certain; explain typical practice and provide a brief reason.

예시: No, I'm not. Generally teachers and former students avoid staying in contact on social media while students are minors, so I haven't kept in touch with my primary school teachers.

제안: Complete the sentence and organize details: state clearly what help you received, why it was helpful, and give a short result. Use linking words and correct grammar (e.g., "helped me finish my homework" not "helped my homework finishing").

예시: For example, one high-school English teacher from Hawaii helped me finish a presentation about my mother by suggesting better vocabulary and correcting my pronunciation, so I felt more confident during the class presentation.

제안: Clarify the comparison structure and give a concise reason. Use linking words like "however" to contrast and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Be specific about what the teacher did that you appreciated.

예시: It depends, but I preferred some of my high-school teachers. For instance, one high-school teacher was very patient and listened carefully to my English, which helped me improve my speaking skills.

× No, I don't, but every teacher that I have met are really friendly and gentle and helpful when I ask for help.

✓ No, I don't, but every teacher that I have met is really friendly, gentle, and helpful when I ask for help.

The subject 'every teacher' is singular, so the verb must be singular ('is' not 'are'). Also add commas for clarity and parallel adjectives. Suggestion: match singular subjects with singular verbs and keep adjective list consistent. Grammar problem type's ID:27

× Not really, because I understand that teaching can be telling and demanding and it also requires a lot of energy, emotion energy to manage classes.

✓ Not really, because I understand that teaching can be tiring and demanding, and it also requires a lot of emotional energy to manage classes.

The original uses 'telling' incorrectly and 'emotion energy' is ungrammatical. Use 'tiring' to describe a demanding activity and 'emotional energy' as the correct noun phrase. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Grammar problem type's ID:22

× So I prefer job with office based position.

✓ So I prefer a job with an office-based position.

Countable singular noun 'job' requires an article ('a'). 'office based' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before the noun: 'office-based'. Also include 'an' before 'office-based position' if you keep 'position', or rephrase to 'office-based job'. Grammar problem type's ID:22

× Yes I do. I remember every teacher that I have met from elementary school to high school.

✓ Yes, I do. I remember every teacher that I have met from elementary school to high school.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural speech punctuation. The sentence is otherwise correct; 'every teacher' is singular but used with 'I remember' which is fine. No verb change needed. (Minor punctuation improvement.) Grammar problem type's ID:27

× Every teachers are really friendly and gentle and nice when I ask for help, which I'm really grateful for.

✓ Every teacher is really friendly, gentle, and nice when I ask for help, which I'm really grateful for.

Use singular form 'teacher' with 'every' and singular verb 'is'. Also add commas for clarity and parallelism. Suggestion: 'every' + singular noun. Grammar problem type's ID:27

× Not, definitely not, because I believe it's illegal to keep in touch with students under the age of 18 and both teachers and students avoid keep in touch on social media or other sources.

✓ No, definitely not, because I believe it's illegal to keep in touch with students under the age of 18, and both teachers and students avoid keeping in touch on social media or other platforms.

'Not' alone is unnatural; use 'No'. 'avoid keep in touch' is ungrammatical—'avoid' must be followed by gerund 'keeping'. 'Sources' is better replaced by 'platforms'. Add a comma before 'and' and after 'No'. Grammar problem type's ID:12

× So I am not in touch with anyone.

✓ So I am not in touch with anyone.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. (Included to show it's acceptable.) Grammar problem type's ID:8

× For example, one of my teachers helped my homework finishing English presentation about my mother.

✓ For example, one of my teachers helped me finish my English presentation about my mother.

Use correct object pronoun 'me' not 'my'. The verb phrase should be 'helped me finish' rather than 'helped my homework finishing'. Also 'my English presentation' is the proper noun phrase order. Suggestions: use 'helped me do/finish + noun' constructions. Grammar problem type's ID:12

× He was from Hawaii and he was mainly teaching English at high school.

✓ He was from Hawaii, and he mainly taught English at a high school.

Use past simple 'taught' to match 'was from' and 'mainly' placed before the verb. Add article 'a' before 'high school' for countable noun. Alternatively 'at high school' is acceptable in British English but add 'the' or 'a' for clarity. Also add a comma before 'and'. Grammar problem type's ID:22

× He was really nice and.

✓ He was really nice.

The sentence is incomplete; ending with 'and' requires a following clause. Remove the dangling 'and' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: finish the thought after 'and' or delete it. Grammar problem type's ID:26

× Well, it varies by teachers that I described, but one of my favorite teacher was at high school.

✓ Well, it varies by the teachers I described, but one of my favorite teachers was in high school.

'varies by teachers that I described' is awkward—use 'varies by the teachers I described'. 'One of my favorite teacher' needs plural 'teachers' after 'one of'. Use 'in high school' or 'at my high school' and add article 'my' if needed. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'teachers was' remains 'teachers was'—here 'one ... was' is fine because subject is 'one'. Grammar problem type's ID:25

× Even if my talk in English was easier and understandable, he tried to listen.

✓ Even if my spoken English was simple and understandable, he tried to listen.

'my talk in English' is unnatural; use 'my spoken English' or 'the way I spoke English'. 'Easier' is comparative and needs a comparison object, so use 'simple' or 'clear' instead. Suggestion: use 'spoken English' and 'simple/clear/understandable' for clarity. Grammar problem type's ID:12