Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because / for instance). Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: I don't have a favorite teacher right now, but I did when I was at school. My physics teacher was my favorite because he was kind and patient, and he explained difficult concepts clearly, which helped me understand physics better.

제안: Provide a direct answer followed by a brief reason. Use linking words like because or however to make the response coherent. Correct basic grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I prefer working in a different field. However, I respect the teaching profession and appreciate how important teachers are.

제안: Answer directly and give two specific, concise details about why you remember them. Use linking words (for example, and, because, so) and correct sentence structure to improve naturalness.

예시: Yes, I still remember my physics teacher because he was very kind and respectful, and he always explained difficult science topics clearly. As a result, I felt more confident in class and still appreciate his help.

제안: Give a direct answer and a clear, concise reason. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing. Use a simple linking word like because, and keep sentences short (1–2 sentences).

예시: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved away after leaving school and we simply lost contact.

제안: Answer with one clear topic sentence and give one or two specific examples of help, using linking words like for example or such as. Remove fillers (uh, um) and repetitive phrases.

예시: He helped me by explaining difficult math and physics problems step by step; for example, he would break down complex equations into simple parts so I could follow and practice them.

제안: Provide a clear comparison sentence and give specific reasons with linking words such as because or since. Avoid repeating the same idea and keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were more supportive and caring. They helped me develop good study habits and moral values, which made learning easier for me.

× At currently I do not have any special or favorite teacher, but when I was in my school I have a favorite teacher.

✓ Currently I do not have any special or favorite teacher, but when I was at school I had a favorite teacher.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'At currently' is incorrect phrase order; use 'Currently'. 'When I was in my school' should be 'when I was at school'. The second clause refers to the past, so 'I have' must be 'I had'. Use consistent tense and correct preposition. Suggestion: Use 'Currently' at start and match past tense for past situations.

× The teacher was my favorite was the physics teacher was very kind and polite and humble person and I I like him a lot because he's too honest and he's too good for me.

✓ My favorite teacher was the physics teacher; he was a very kind, polite, and humble person, and I liked him a lot because he was honest and very good to me.

The original has redundant 'was' and lack of subject-verb agreement and mixed tenses. Use one clear subject and verb: 'My favorite teacher was the physics teacher.' Maintain past tense 'liked' and 'was' when describing a past teacher. 'He's too honest' should be 'he was honest' and 'too' is unnecessary; use 'very' or 'very good to me'. Also remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: Keep one clause per idea, use commas for adjectives order, and keep tense consistent.

× No, I don't want to be teacher in the future that it doesn't mean I am disrespecting the the. Profession, but especially I do not like to be a teacher in my future.

✓ No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future; that does not mean I am disrespecting the profession, but I especially do not want to be a teacher in the future.

Missing and extra articles: 'be teacher' needs 'be a teacher'. 'the the. Profession' has repeated 'the' and wrong capitalization and punctuation. Also 'that it doesn't mean' is awkward; use 'that does not mean'. Maintain consistent phrasing 'do not want' instead of 'do not like to be'. Suggestion: Use articles correctly before singular countable nouns and avoid duplicate words.

× I want to be in a something else.

✓ I want to do something else.

Incorrect phrase 'be in a something else' is ungrammatical. Use the correct verb 'do' with 'something else' to express wanting a different occupation: 'do something else'. Suggestion: Use common collocations: 'do something else' or 'work in a different field'.

× Yeah, I have a teacher from my past that I still remember.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher from my past whom I still remember.

Using 'yeah' is informal but acceptable; main issue is relative pronoun form. Use 'whom' (or 'who') as object—'whom I still remember' is more formal and correct. Tense is fine. Suggestion: Prefer 'yes' in formal speech and 'whom' for object of verb.

× He was so kind and so, so respectful, respected person.

✓ He was a very kind and very respectful person.

Redundant words and incorrect adjective form 'respected person' (means others respected him) vs 'respectful person' (he showed respect). Use 'very' instead of repeated 'so, so' and include the article 'a'. Suggestion: Use correct adjective 'respectful' to describe the person's behavior and an article before singular nouns.

× And he was always truthful and he helped me to, I understand any topic of my science category.

✓ He was always truthful and he helped me understand any topic in my science subjects.

Incorrect insertion of 'to' before 'I understand' and wrong verb form. Use either 'helped me to understand' or 'helped me understand'. Also 'science category' is unnatural; use 'science subjects'. Suggestion: Use 'helped me (to) understand' and 'in my science subjects'.

× No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because whenever I got detached from my school, I got I also stay out from my teacher so that now I'm not in touch with my any of my primary school teachers and they are also not in my touch.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because after I left school I also lost contact with my teachers, so now I'm not in touch with any of my primary school teachers and they are not in contact with me either.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing: 'got detached from my school' should be 'left school'. 'I got I also stay out from my teacher' is ungrammatical; use 'lost contact with my teachers'. 'not in my touch' is incorrect; use 'not in contact with me'. Maintain past simple for leaving and present perfect/simple for current state. Suggestion: Use common expressions 'left school' and 'lost contact' and correct word order.

× In, uh, whenever I'm, whenever I was confusing any of my topic and whenever I was, uh, confused a little bit in math and physics, my favorite teacher was a physics teacher.

✓ Whenever I was confused about a topic in math or physics, my favorite teacher, the physics teacher, helped me.

Incorrect use of 'I'm' and 'was confusing any of my topic'. Use 'was confused about a topic' and avoid redundant clauses. Put teacher identification clearly. Keep past tense when referring to past habits. Suggestion: Use 'confused about' + topic and concise sentence structure.

× He always helped me to understand any hard and any, any of math or physics equations and he was so, uh, supportive and so much, uh, good.

✓ He always helped me understand difficult math and physics equations, and he was very supportive and kind.

Redundant 'any' and awkward 'any hard and any, any of math or physics equations'. Use 'difficult math and physics equations'. 'so much good' is incorrect; use 'very supportive and kind'. Keep past tense. Suggestion: Use clear adjectives (difficult) and natural collocations (supportive and kind).

× Yeah, I think I like my primary school teachers more than my school teach high school teachers because they were so much supportive and caring since I was in my primary school.

✓ Yes, I think I like my primary school teachers more than my high school teachers because they were much more supportive and caring when I was in primary school.

Awkward word order 'my school teach high school teachers' should be 'my high school teachers'. 'so much supportive' is incorrect; use 'much more supportive' when comparing. 'since I was in my primary school' should be 'when I was in primary school' for past reference. Suggestion: Use correct comparison forms 'more...than' and proper word order for noun phrases.

× They helped me to develop, They helped me to develop my moral education and they helped me to grow and they helped me to, uh, understand, understand anything easy.

✓ They helped me develop my moral values, helped me grow, and helped me understand things more easily.

Repetitive 'They helped me to develop' and clumsy 'moral education'. Use 'moral values' and combine actions with parallel structure. 'understand anything easy' is ungrammatical; use 'understand things more easily'. Suggestion: Use concise parallel verbs and natural nouns like 'moral values' and adverbs like 'more easily'.