Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ недостаточно естественен и содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Сформулируйте тему одним предложением, затем добавьте 1–2 детализированных предложения с причинами, используя связки (because, and, for example). Избегайте слова «unpredictable», если вы не объясняете, что имеете в виду; лучше сказать «creative» или «surprising». Проверьте согласование артиклей и форм (a very unpredictable person → an unpredictable person).

예시: I do have a favourite teacher at Fast Education, my English tutor. He is very smart and creative, and he often uses surprising activities in class that keep me motivated. For example, he designs role-plays and games that help me practise speaking in real situations.

제안: Ответ краткий и неорганизованный, с множественными ошибками в грамматике и повторениями. Начинайте с чёткой темы (Yes/No + краткое пояснение), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные причины с логическими связками (because, so, for example). Избегайте повторять одни и те же фразы и следите за согласованием (a teacher is a good profession → teaching is a good profession).

예시: Yes, I would like to be a teacher because teaching is a rewarding profession and it helps others learn. Also, it can provide a stable income and opportunities to improve communication skills, for example by preparing lessons and giving feedback to students.

제안: Ответ смешивает времена и содержит неестественные выражения («angry and strong person», «knowledge was unpredictable»). Постройте ответ с одним основным предложением, затем уточняющими деталями: опишите характер учителя и конкретный способ, как он помог вам понять предмет (using linking words like although, but, because).

예시: Yes, I still remember my maths teacher from school. He was strict and sometimes seemed angry, but he was very knowledgeable and explained difficult topics clearly, so I could understand complex concepts like algebra.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки лексики и структуры («sought me a lot of things» некорректно). Дайте прямой ответ и объясните, как вы поддерживаете общение (for example: by phone, social media), а затем опишите конкретное качество учителя и пример помощи. Используйте правильные времена и избегайте повторений.

예시: Yes, I am still in touch with one of my primary school teachers through social media. She was very kind and patient, and she helped me with reading and basic maths when I was young, which made learning easier.

제안: Ответ расплывчат и содержит грамматические ошибки и заикания. Начните с чёткого предложения, описывающего тип помощи, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных примера или методов (for example, gives feedback, suggests resources). Используйте правильный порядок слов (he explains things to me, he shows me how to study).

예시: My English teacher at the centre has helped me by showing effective study methods. For example, he gives detailed feedback on my speaking, suggests useful online exercises, and recommends books and podcasts to improve my vocabulary.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит грамматические ошибки и незавершённую мысль. Дайте ясное сравнение и объяснение с конкретикой: скажите, чем они были лучше (kindness, support, early guidance) и приведите пример того, как это помогло вам позже. Используйте связки (because, so, for example) и корректную грамматику.

예시: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were very kind and supportive. For example, they taught me study habits and basic skills that helped me succeed in high school, such as time management and reading comprehension.

× I like him because he's very smart and very unpredictable person.

✓ I like him because he's a very smart and unpredictable person.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the noun phrase 'very smart and unpredictable person'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'very' to form 'a very smart and unpredictable person'.

× In my opinion yes, teacher is good profession for future.

✓ In my opinion, yes, being a teacher is a good profession for the future.

The sentence omits necessary articles and a gerund structure. 'Teacher' as a profession should be 'being a teacher' or 'a teacher is a good profession'. Also use 'a' before 'good profession' and 'the' before 'future' when referring to a general time frame. Suggestion: use 'being a teacher is a good profession for the future' or 'a teacher is a good profession for the future'.

× It can be useful for you and in my opinion salary is good.

✓ It can be useful for you, and in my opinion, the salary is good.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'salary' when speaking about a specific salary type. Also punctuation improves clarity. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'salary' and use commas to separate clauses.

× You can find good salary and money from their work from this work.

✓ You can earn a good salary from this work.

The original is repetitive and uses incorrect pronoun 'their' for an implicit subject. 'Find good salary and money' is unnatural; 'earn a good salary' is the correct collocation. Suggestion: use 'earn' and eliminate redundancy: 'earn a good salary from this work'.

× Yes, I had. I had one teacher who teaches me math.

✓ Yes, I did. I had one teacher who taught me math.

The short answer to 'Do you have...' in past should be 'Yes, I did.' 'Teaches' is present tense; since referring to past, use 'taught'. Suggestion: use past tense 'taught' and 'did' for short affirmative answer about past.

× He was very angry and strong person but his knowledge was unpredictable.

✓ He was a very strict and strong person, but his knowledge was remarkable.

'Angry' describes a temporary emotion; for a teacher's characteristic 'strict' fits better. Also missing article 'a' before 'very strict and strong person'. 'Unpredictable' is odd for 'knowledge'; 'remarkable' or 'impressive' are more appropriate. Suggestion: add 'a' and choose adjectives that collocate correctly with 'person' and 'knowledge'.

× He explains topics very well and I can I could understand.

✓ He explained topics very well, and I could understand them.

Mixed tenses and duplicate modal 'can I could'. Since referring to past, use 'explained' and 'could'. Also add object 'them' to 'understand' or restructure sentence. Suggestion: maintain past tense and remove extra words.

× Yes, I am. I had one teacher who teaches me in primary school.

✓ Yes, I am. I had one teacher who taught me in primary school.

'Teaches' is present tense but the rest refers to past ('I had'). Use past tense 'taught' for consistency when talking about primary school teachers. Suggestion: use past tense verbs when referring to past relationships.

× ** *** was very good teacher, she was very kind and she sought me a lot of things which I don't know which I didn't know.

✓ She was a very good teacher; she was very kind and taught me many things that I didn't know.

Missing article 'a' before 'very good teacher'. 'Sought me a lot of things' is incorrect verb choice; 'taught me many things' is correct. Also tense inconsistency 'I don't know which I didn't know' is redundant; use past 'I didn't know'. Suggestion: use 'taught me many things that I didn't know.'

× I have one teacher in my English center.

✓ I have a teacher at my English center.

'One teacher' is acceptable but 'a teacher' is more natural. Use preposition 'at' for institutions or centers rather than 'in' for this context. Suggestion: say 'a teacher at my English center.'

× He explains me uh, a lot of ways which I should go because he very kind person.

✓ He explains to me a lot of ways I should go because he is a very kind person.

'Explain' normally takes an indirect object with 'to': 'explains to me'. Missing 'is' before 'a very kind person'. 'A lot of ways which I should go' is awkward; better 'a lot of ways I should go' or 'many ways I should take.' Suggestion: include 'to' and the verb 'is' and rephrase 'ways'.

× He explains me how should I uh, learn something or.

✓ He explains to me how I should learn something.

Word order in indirect questions should be subject + verb: 'how I should learn', not 'how should I'. Also use 'explains to me'. Remove trailing 'or.' Suggestion: use 'explains to me how I should learn.'

× Yes, I do, because my primary school teachers were very kindly For example, they teach me a lot of ways for my high school, for my.

✓ Yes, I do, because my primary school teachers were very kind. For example, they taught me many ways that helped me in high school.

'Kindly' is an adverb; use adjective 'kind' to describe people. 'Teach' should be past 'taught' when referring to past. 'A lot of ways for my high school' is unclear; clarify as 'many ways that helped me in high school.' Suggestion: use adjective 'kind', past tense 'taught', and clearer phrasing.