Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the teacher and the subject, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and vague phrases.

예시: Yes. My favorite teacher is my university professor who teaches curatorship. I really enjoy her classes because she uses real museum examples and gives practical assignments, which helped me understand media and exhibition design better.

제안: Clarify your reason and use coherent linking. Begin with a clear answer, then explain why simply and specifically. Avoid confusing past references; use one clear reason and an example.

예시: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I want to encourage students to think openly. For example, my former teachers were strict and I felt unable to express my ideas, so I hope to create a more supportive classroom.

제안: Give a concise, well-structured reply: state who the teacher was, where and why you remember them, using linking words. Be specific about what impressed you and how it affected you.

예시: Yes. I still remember my English teacher in the Philippines because she was very encouraging. Unlike my Japanese teacher, she praised my speaking attempts and gave patient feedback, which improved my confidence in English.

제안: Answer directly and give one brief reason with clear timing. Use correct grammar for time references and avoid extra words. Provide a short supporting detail if possible.

예시: No, I'm not. I left primary school about 20 years ago, so I have lost contact and I don't remember where most of my teachers are now.

제안: Structure your answer: start with a clear topic sentence describing one or two concrete ways the teacher helped you, then give a specific example. Avoid vague fragments and filler sounds.

예시: My favorite teacher helped me by building my confidence and teaching practical skills. For example, she organized group projects that improved my teamwork and showed me how to present my ideas clearly to friends and classmates.

제안: Provide a clear comparison and a direct opinion. Start with whether you prefer one group, then explain briefly why, using linking words. If unsure, say so succinctly and give a reason.

예시: Honestly, I don't have a strong preference between primary and high school teachers because each taught me different things. However, I prefer my university professors because their teaching is more relevant to my career interests.

× My favorite teacher is university teacher, especially my professor because I learn about media or curator, especially curator classes.

✓ My favorite teacher is a university teacher, especially my professor, because I learn about media and curation, especially curation classes.

Missing indefinite article before 'university teacher' and awkward word choice. Use 'a' for a singular, unspecified profession. 'Curator' is a person; the correct noun for the subject is 'curation' or 'curation classes'. Also replace 'or' with 'and' to show both related topics. Improve punctuation by adding commas for clarity.

× Yes I do. I want to be a teacher in the my future because before I hated my teacher because I didn't open my mind and tell their tell their.

✓ Yes, I do. I want to be a teacher in the future because before I disliked my teachers; they didn't open their minds or share their knowledge.

Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my future' ('in the future' or 'in my future' — here 'in the future' is natural). 'Hated' can be toned to 'disliked' for appropriateness. Pronoun and verb issues: 'I didn't open my mind and tell their tell their' is ungrammatical; likely meaning teachers did not open their minds or communicate. Use 'they didn't open their minds or share their knowledge.' Also add commas and semicolon for sentence clarity.

× Yes, of course I remember them because I went to the Philippines, I studied English and I impressed from there because Japanese teacher didn't encouraged me but Filipino.

✓ Yes, of course I remember them because I went to the Philippines, I studied English, and I was impressed by the experience there because Japanese teachers didn't encourage me but Filipino teachers did.

Incorrect preposition: 'impressed from' should be 'impressed by'. Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'didn't encouraged' should be 'didn't encourage' (do-support in past tense requires base verb). Clarify 'Japanese teacher' and 'Filipino' to plural 'teachers' or specify individuals, and complete the comparison with 'did'.

× No I'm not because I was a 20 years ago when I was in primary school student so I don't remember where also they are them.

✓ No, I'm not, because it was 20 years ago when I was a primary school student, so I don't remember where they are now.

Wrong phrase 'I was a 20 years ago' should be 'it was 20 years ago'. Article use: 'primary school student' needs 'a' before it. Redundant pronouns 'they are them' — use 'they are now'. Punctuation with commas improves readability.

× My favorite teacher was helping me and because I am concern about everything such as. Grand. MMM, such as friends.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me because I am concerned about many things, such as family and friends.

Awkward and fragmented sentence. Use past tense 'helped' to match 'was helping' intended meaning. 'I am concern' should be 'I am concerned'. Remove unclear fragments ('Grand. MMM') and replace with meaningful examples like 'family and friends'. Combine clauses for coherent structure.

× To me, honest, I didn't, I don't know because I it didn't drive teachers, primary schools and high schools. But I like the. Professor in my university.

✓ To be honest, I don't know because I couldn't decide between primary and high school teachers. But I like the professors at my university.

Multiple issues: word order and filler words ('To me, honest' should be 'To be honest'). Tense and verb choice: 'it didn't drive teachers' is unclear; replace with 'I couldn't decide between'. Remove stray article 'the.' Use plural 'professors' and 'at my university' for natural phrasing.