Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and give one specific example of how she helped you. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I do. My favourite English teacher was very kind and always explained grammar and literature clearly. For example, she used simple diagrams and examples to help me understand complex tenses, which improved my writing.

제안: Give a clear direct answer, correct repetition and grammar, and provide a specific reason with a linking word. Avoid vague statements; mention one concrete difficulty you face when explaining.

예시: No, I don't want to be a teacher. When I tried teaching my younger brother, I often mixed up the rules and became confused, so I felt I wasn't effective. Therefore, I prefer a career where clear instructions are less central.

제안: Avoid unclear or alarming words and be accurate. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'scolded' not 'shot') and add a brief reason why you remember her, using linking words to explain cause and effect.

예시: Yes, I remember a strict teacher from my past. She once scolded me for making repeated mistakes, which made a strong impression on me and helped me become more careful with my work.

제안: Be polite and precise. Use correct expressions ('lost touch' or 'I'm not in touch'), correct grammar, and give one specific reason if appropriate, using linking words to connect ideas. Keep it brief and neutral.

예시: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers now. After I moved to college and they stayed in Chumkanth, I gradually lost contact because of some negative experiences, so we stopped communicating.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and be specific about the help. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one concrete example of advice, using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: She helped me decide on my future career by discussing my strengths and suggesting suitable subjects. For example, she encouraged me to apply to college and advised which courses would suit my interests, which motivated me to continue studying.

× Yes, I have my lovely teacher who teach me from English lesson and she's very kind and she always explain grammars and other stories deeply.

✓ Yes, I have a lovely teacher who teaches me English lessons; she's very kind and always explains grammar and other topics in depth.

Errors: 'teach' and 'explain' need -s for third person singular (she teaches, she explains). 'My lovely teacher' -> 'a lovely teacher' is more natural when introducing someone. 'from English lesson' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'English lessons'. 'grammars' is incorrect plural; use uncountable 'grammar'. 'other stories deeply' -> 'other topics in depth' is natural. Suggest practicing subject-verb agreement for third person singular and choosing correct noun forms and prepositions.

× To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because when I teach teach something to someone, I can express my opinion.

✓ To be honest, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because when I teach something to someone, I can express my opinion.

Error: repeated word 'teach teach' is a typo/repetition (sentence structure error). The rest fits future preference; keep present tense 'teach' when talking about general action. Remove duplicate word. Suggest proofreading to catch duplicates.

× For example, when I teach something to my brother, I always confused all the rules of something.

✓ For example, when I teach something to my brother, I always get confused about the rules.

Error: 'always confused' is incorrect verb form; need present simple with 'get' + past participle or adjective: 'get confused' or 'am always confused'. Also 'all the rules of something' is vague and unidiomatic; use 'the rules' or 'the rules about it'. Suggest using 'get confused about' for habitual confusion and be specific about the object.

× Yes, I have a teacher. She was very strict and one day she she shot me for my mistakes.

✓ Yes, I had a teacher. She was very strict, and one day she punished me for my mistakes.

Errors: 'I have a teacher' with 'was' inconsistent; use past 'had'. Repeated 'she she' is typo. 'shot me' is incorrect and dangerous word choice; likely meant 'scolded' or 'punished'. Use 'punished' or 'scolded'. Suggest checking word choices and consistency of tense.

× That's why she's still my remember.

✓ That's why I still remember her.

Errors: 'she's still my remember' is ungrammatical. Need active construction: subject 'I' + verb 'remember' + object 'her'. Also tense 'still remember' is present. Suggest practicing subject-object order and correct verb choice.

× Now after I went to college I cancelled all the bonds with my teacher because they were live in Chumkanth and I don't want touch with them because of bad experiences.

✓ After I went to college, I cut off all contact with my teachers because they lived in Chumkanth, and I don't want to keep in touch with them because of bad experiences.

Errors: 'Now after I went to college' is awkward; 'After I went to college' is sufficient. 'cancelled all the bonds with my teacher' is odd; use 'cut off all contact with my teachers'. 'they were live in Chumkanth' should be 'they lived in Chumkanth' (past tense) and 'they' refers to 'teachers' plural. 'I don't want touch with them' -> 'I don't want to keep in touch with them' or 'I don't want to be in touch with them'. Suggest learning common collocations: 'cut off contact', 'keep in touch' and using correct verb forms.

× My favorite teacher helped me to choose my future career and encourage me to move on.

✓ My favourite teacher helped me choose my future career and encouraged me to move on.

Errors: Parallel tense: 'helped me to choose' is acceptable but remove 'to' for naturalness; more importantly 'encourage' should be past 'encouraged' to match 'helped'. Maintain past tense for completed actions. Also note British spelling 'favourite' optional. Suggest matching verb tenses and maintaining parallel structure.

× Once she give many advice and encouraged me to study in college.

✓ Once she gave me much advice and encouraged me to study in college.

Errors: 'give' should be past 'gave'. 'many advice' is incorrect; 'advice' is uncountable so use 'much advice' or 'a lot of advice' or 'many pieces of advice'. Keep past tense consistency. Suggest learning countable vs uncountable nouns and past tense forms.