Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the reply more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and a brief supporting detail. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Use a linking phrase to add one specific example of how she helps you.

예시: Yes. My favourite teacher is my English teacher because she always helps me with problems and gives me useful advice about my studies. For example, she reviews my essays and suggests ways to improve my vocabulary and structure.

제안: Organise into a clear topic sentence and two concise supporting reasons. Avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas and give a short specific detail about what subject or age group you would teach.

예시: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future because I enjoy communicating with people and helping them learn. For instance, I would like to teach English to teenagers because I enjoy explaining grammar and encouraging confidence in speaking.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the teacher and correct gender/pronouns; avoid irrelevant comments about appearance. Give one specific memory or reason why you remember them, using a linking phrase (for example, because, who). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I still remember my primary school maths teacher because she was very kind and patient. For example, she spent extra time explaining difficult topics and always encouraged me when I struggled.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific detail about how you keep in touch. Remove repetition and use correct verb forms and linking words. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences and give an example of the method of contact or a typical interaction.

예시: Yes, I am still in touch with some of my primary school teachers. We often chat on social media and sometimes share jokes or memories from school, which is always fun.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence describing a typical way she helps, then add a specific example of advice she gave. Use correct article and plural/singular forms (e.g., 'excellent advice', not 'an excellent advice'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (for example, for instance).

예시: She has helped me by giving practical advice when I'm stressed about my studies or future career. For instance, she suggested joining a writing club to improve my skills and helped me plan steps for applying to university.

× Yes definitely my favorite teacher is my English teacher because she always try to help me with my problems and giving the best advice for my future.

✓ Yes, definitely. My favorite teacher is my English teacher because she always tries to help me with my problems and gives the best advice for my future.

The subject 'she' is third person singular, so verbs must take the -s form: 'try' -> 'tries'. Also parallel structure requires matching verbs: 'always tries... and gives' instead of 'and giving'. Add commas for clarity.

× In the future, yeah, of course. I like communicating with people and I always try to help other people and I'm interested. So in teaching. That's why in my opinion, I can, I can be a teacher in the future.

✓ In the future, yes, of course. I like communicating with people and I always try to help others, and I am interested in teaching. That's why, in my opinion, I can be a teacher in the future.

Fragment 'I'm interested. So in teaching.' is incorrect; combine into 'I am interested in teaching' using correct preposition 'in'. Use 'others' instead of 'other people' for concision. Remove repeated 'I can'. Ensure sentences are complete and flow logically.

× Yeah, I remember 1 my teacher who is very beautiful, he was, who was very beautiful and kind. Uh, she was, umm, she was a maths teacher and I love very much still her.

✓ Yes, I remember my teacher who was very beautiful and kind. She was a math teacher and I still love her very much.

Pronoun gender is inconsistent (he/she); choose 'she' to match 'teacher' later. Remove redundant phrases and correct word order: 'I still love her very much'. Use 'math' or 'maths' consistently; 'math' is common in US English.

× Yeah, of course we we often chat, chat together and telling jokes, telling jokes together and we have fun all the time.

✓ Yes, of course. We often chat and tell jokes together, and we have fun all the time.

Remove duplicate words 'we we' and repeated 'chat'. Use parallel verb forms 'chat and tell' (both base form) rather than 'chat... and telling'. Ensure sentence punctuation and flow.

× When I'm stressed or when I'm tired, my favorite teacher always tries to give me an excellent advice for my career or for my future.

✓ When I'm stressed or tired, my favorite teacher always tries to give me excellent advice about my career or my future.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun so 'an excellent advice' is incorrect; use 'excellent advice' without 'an'. 'Always tries' is correct third person singular; also 'about' is a more natural preposition here. Removed redundant 'when' for conciseness.