Teachers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence naming the teacher, then give one or two specific examples of how they helped using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences.

예시: My favorite teacher was Dr. Hussain, who worked as a horticultural therapist. He helped me with my studies by explaining difficult concepts with real-life examples, and he also supported me with personal problems by listening patiently and giving practical advice.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (use nouns/forms correctly) and finish your thought. Avoid repetition.

예시: I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I don't have enough patience and I find teaching quite demanding. For example, teachers must manage many students and prepare lessons constantly, so I would prefer a less stressful job in business.

제안: Structure your reply: state clearly that you remember a particular teacher, then give specific examples of how they helped with coherent linking words. Correct pronouns and tense, and avoid trailing off.

예시: Yes, I remember one teacher who helped me both academically and personally. For instance, he always listened kindly when I had problems and explained difficult topics step by step, which improved my grades.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then give specific details about how you stay in touch using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid listing too many platforms and correct small grammar errors.

예시: Yes, I am still in touch with one of my primary school English teachers. For example, we regularly chat on WhatsApp and occasionally message on Facebook to catch up about life and teaching.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence then specific examples of actions the teacher took, using linking words and correct expressions. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "at least 30 per student") and be concise.

예시: I used to be very shy at school, but my favourite teacher helped me by encouraging me to speak in class and giving me small tasks to build confidence. As a result, I learned how to express myself and handle problems more confidently.

× Yes, of course, my favorite teacher was doctor, said Hussain, who worked as a horticulture therapist.

✓ Yes, of course, my favorite teacher was a doctor named Hussain, who worked as a horticultural therapist.

The sentence lacked the indefinite article before the noun 'doctor' and used an incorrect verb phrase 'said Hussain' in this context. Also 'horticulture therapist' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'horticultural'. Use 'a' before a singular, countable noun when introducing someone for the first time. Replace 'said Hussain' with 'named Hussain' to identify the teacher.

× He helped me in, he helped me both in studies and in my personal problems.

✓ He helped me both with my studies and with my personal problems.

Redundant phrasing and incorrect preposition use. Use 'helped me with' to indicate assistance and avoid repeating the clause. Combine items with 'both ... and ...' and use parallel structure.

× His his teaching was outstanding and.

✓ His teaching was outstanding.

The sentence contained a duplicated word 'His' and an incomplete trailing conjunction 'and.' Remove the duplicate and the unfinished connector to form a complete sentence.

× I think I don't have the patience of the teaching.

✓ I don't think I have the patience for teaching.

Incorrect preposition and word order. Use 'have the patience for' rather than 'patience of the teaching.' Also place 'don't think' before the clause for natural English word order.

× From my point of view, teaching is very stressful and or demanding.

✓ From my point of view, teaching is very stressful and demanding.

Using 'and or' is incorrect; choose either 'and' or 'or' depending on meaning. Here both adjectives apply, so use 'and' and remove the slash. Maintain parallel adjectives.

× I will I will always choose a business or job which is less tension and.

✓ I will always choose a business or job that involves less stress.

Repeated 'I will' is redundant and 'less tension' is unnatural; use 'less stress.' Use 'that involves' to make the relative clause clear and remove the trailing conjunction.

× Yes, of course, one of my teacher who helped me academically and personally whenever I have faced problems.

✓ Yes, of course, one of my teachers helped me academically and personally whenever I faced problems.

'One of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers' (plural after 'one of'). Tense consistency: use past tense 'helped' and 'faced' since referring to past events.

× I told to him he heard me very lovely and has a potential about studies was very good.

✓ I talked to him; he listened to me kindly and was very knowledgeable about studies.

'Told to him' is incorrect — use 'talked to him' or 'told him.' 'He heard me very lovely' is ungrammatical; use 'listened to me kindly' or 'listened to me attentively.' 'Has a potential about studies was very good' is fragmented; rephrase to state he 'was very knowledgeable about studies.' Ensure proper verb forms and sentence boundaries.

× He explained the topics where.

✓ He explained the topics clearly.

Sentence incomplete and contains a misplaced 'where.' Provide a complete predicate that conveys how he explained the topics, e.g., 'clearly.'

× Absolutely yes. One of my teacher who teaches us English, I have a good contacts with him for instant.

✓ Absolutely. One of my teachers who taught us English — I have good contact with him, for instance.

'One of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers.' 'Have a good contacts' is incorrect: 'have good contact' or 'have good contacts' (without 'a') but 'have good contact with him' is preferred. 'For instant' is a misspelling of 'for instance.' Also adjust tense consistency if referring to past teacher: 'who taught us English.'

× We chatting with each other through social media like WhatsApp, Facebook or Instagram etcetera.

✓ We chat with each other through social media like WhatsApp, Facebook, or Instagram.

Missing auxiliary verb for continuous tense or wrong tense choice. Use simple present 'We chat' for habitual action, or 'We are chatting' for current action. Remove 'etcetera' and include commas for list clarity.

× I was the shy person in my school as well as at least 30 per student.

✓ I was a shy person in my school, as were at least 30 percent of the students.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect quantifier. Use 'a shy person' and express the statistic as '30 percent of the students.' Use 'as were' for parallel past tense comparison.

× My favorite teacher helped me to motivate and encourage me at how to face and solve my problems.

✓ My favorite teacher helped to motivate and encourage me on how to face and solve my problems.

Redundant use of 'me' after 'helped' (helped to motivate and encourage me is acceptable but 'helped me to motivate' is wrong). Better: 'helped to motivate and encourage me on how to face and solve my problems.' Use 'on how to' to introduce the method.