Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且直接，但可改进细节与连贯性。建议在主题句后用一到两句具体举例或原因，并用连接词使表述更连贯；避免重复“organize/organized”。可以加入短暂对比或频率词以丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. For example, I make my bed every morning and put clothes in the wardrobe so I can find them quickly. Because my room is neat, I feel calmer and can start the day more positively.

제안: 回答结构清晰，有因果关系，語言自然。可通过补充具体童年例子（例如每周打扫或收玩具）和使用连接词来增强细节，使答案更具体。注意避免重复同义表达。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me to tidy up every Saturday, and I would put toys back on the shelf and sweep the floor. Because of that routine, I naturally developed good organization habits that I still follow today.

제안: 回答具体且有例子，且说明了效果，表現很好。可以再加一兩個小细节（比如使用收纳盒或定期整理时间）和连接词，使描述更丰富且显得更有条理。

예시: I always clean my desk after studying. For instance, I throw away rubbish, sort papers into folders, and put books on a shelf or in a box. Doing this helps me concentrate better when I return to study.

제안: 回答直接且包含理由與例子，但語句有小重复（'find things' 与 'finding my books'）。建议用连接词扩展观点（例如对比混乱带来的问题）并提供更具体的后果或频率来增强说服力。

예시: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it saves time and reduces stress. For example, when my desk is organized I can quickly find a textbook and start work immediately, whereas a messy desk often wastes ten or fifteen minutes and makes me anxious.

× Yes, I like to keep things tidy. I always organize my bed so that I can find things easily and an organized environment can make me feel relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy. I always organize my bed so that I can find things easily, and an organized environment can make me feel relaxed.

句子中在两个并列分句之间缺少连词前的逗号。在复合句中，当连词（例如 and）连接两个完整的独立主谓结构时，前面一般需要用逗号分隔以提高可读性和符合英语书写习惯。建议在 and 前加逗号。

× Yes. When I was a child, my parents always encouraged me to keep my room tidy, so I developed the habit of cleaning regularly. As a result, I am an organized person now.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, my parents always encouraged me to keep my room tidy, so I developed the habit of cleaning regularly. As a result, I am an organized person now.

原句时态使用正确，用了过去时描述童年时的习惯（encouraged, developed），以及现在时描述当前状态（am）。无需更改。保持现在完成和过去时的区别：描述过去发生并已完成的动作用过去时，描述现在的状态用现在时。

× I always clean my desk after working or studying. For instance, I throw away my rubbish and arrange my books neatly on the shelf. By doing this, I can concentrate better during the next study session.

✓ I always clean my desk after working or studying. For instance, I throw away my rubbish and arrange my books neatly on the shelf. By doing this, I can concentrate better during the next study session.

句子中使用的动名词短语（after working or studying; By doing this）都是正确的结构，用于表示在某动作之后或通过某行为达到的结果。无需改动。

× Yes, it is necessary to be tidy because it can help me find things more quickly and make me feel more comfortable. For instance, if my desk is organized, I can save time finding my books and feeling less stress.

✓ Yes, it is necessary to be tidy because it can help me find things more quickly and make me feel more comfortable. For instance, if my desk is organized, I can save time finding my books and feel less stressed.

原句中最后一部分使用了不对称的动词结构："save time finding my books and feeling less stress"。并列结构应保持动词形式一致，前项为动词不定式或动词短语（save time finding），后项也应使用动词（feel）。另外，常用表达为 "feel less stressed"（形容词形式）或 "experience less stress"。建议将后半句改为 "feel less stressed" 以保持平行和自然表达。