Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清晰，表达了观点并给出原因，但句子有语法和用词不准确（如“studies or works”），且略显冗长。可以用更自然的短句并加入连接词，使表达更地道。注意单复数和词性搭配。

예시: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy makes me feel relaxed after a busy day of study or work, and it helps me unwind.

제안: 回答包含过去习惯的信息，但时态使用不准确（应使用过去式，如“liked”或“used to”），且部分表达不够具体。建议用一两句话说明习惯并举具体细节或例子，用连接词衔接。

예시: Yes, I used to. When I was a child I liked things neat, so every weekend I would clean my room myself — dusting shelves and putting toys away — and my mother always praised me.

제안: 回答试图列步骤，但表达重复且句子结构笨拙（多次使用“I would like”），缺少流畅的连词和更具体的细节。建议用清晰的顺序词（first, then, finally），并给出具体例子如整理文件、用收纳盒等。控制在最多五句内。

예시: I follow a simple routine: first I sort and throw away things I no longer need, then I wipe down the desk and organise papers into folders, and finally I tidy small items into boxes.

제안: 观点明确且有理由，但句子有些重复（两次表达相同意思）。可以扩展理由并给出具体结果或例子，使用连接词使逻辑更强，如because or which helps. 保持简洁不超过五句。

예시: Yes, absolutely — being tidy helps clear your mind because you can find things more easily, which reduces stress and improves concentration.

× Yes, certainly keeping things tidy makes me feel comfortable, especially when I finish a busy day of studies or works.

✓ Yes, certainly. Keeping things tidy makes me feel comfortable, especially when I finish a busy day of study or work.

问题类型：主谓一致/词形使用错误。原句中“studies or works”用法不自然且与“a busy day of”搭配不当。英文中常用“a busy day of study”或“a busy day of work”，也可用复数“studies”表示学业但不与“a day of”连用。建议使用“study or work”。此外在“Yes, certainly”后应加句号并将后半句作为独立句子。

× Yes, actually when I was a kid, I like tidy and clean.

✓ Yes, actually when I was a kid, I liked to keep things tidy and clean.

问题类型：现在时/过去时错误（Present tense issue）。句子描述过去的习惯，应使用过去时“liked”。另外“I like tidy and clean”结构不正确，需使用动词短语“liked to keep things tidy and clean”或形容词搭配。建议使用“liked to keep things tidy and clean”。

× So I remember every weekend I tend to clean my room by myself and my mom praised me a lot.

✓ So I remember that every weekend I used to clean my room by myself and my mom praised me a lot.

问题类型：现在时/过去时错误。句子讲述过去的常态，应该用过去习惯表达，如“used to”或过去式“cleaned”。原句中“tend to”表示现在或一般习惯，不适合过去情境。建议改为“used to clean”或“cleaned”。

× There are some procedures. Firstly, I tend to throw the things I don't use anymore and then I would like to clean the floors and the desks and the chairs, and then I would like to clean up some little things.

✓ There are a few steps. First, I tend to throw away things I don't use anymore, then I clean the floor, the desk and the chair, and finally I tidy up small items.

问题类型：介词/短语使用不当与措辞不自然。原句中“procedures”在此语境不自然，应为“steps”或“a few steps”。“throw the things”要用“throw away things”。“floors and the desks and the chairs”冗余且复数与上下文不一致，改为单数可指该工作区的家具。重复使用“would like to”在叙述常规动作中不合适，使用简单现在时或“tend to”更自然。最后“some little things”应为“small items”或“small things”。建议改为上面版本。

× Yes, absolutely. In my opinion, keeping tidy can help people to keep their minds clear. I think that's very helpful.

✓ Yes, absolutely. In my opinion, keeping things tidy can help people keep their minds clear. I think that's very helpful.

问题类型：现在时/词语搭配。原句中“keeping tidy”缺少宾语，建议使用“keeping things tidy”。此外“help people to keep”中不必使用不定式“to”，更自然的是“help people keep”。解释：在一般陈述中可省略“to”。