Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更简洁、自然并避免重复。开头给出一个明确的主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由支持。注意语法（如“doesn't bother me”重复且有语序错误）。可以用连接词（because, so）使衔接更顺畅。

예시: Not really. My desk is often untidy, but I find it helps my productivity because I always know where things are. For example, I keep frequently used items within reach, so I can work without wasting time looking for them.

제안: 回答总体明确，但存在时态和表达错误（如“I'll before guests came”不合适）。尽量不要重复“when I was a child”与“used to”同义堆砌。可以补充具体细节（频率、做法）并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I did. My parents encouraged me, so I cleaned my room every weekend and arranged my toys and books neatly. Before guests arrived I would quickly tidy up the floor and put toys into boxes to make a good impression.

제안: 内容具体但有语法和用词错误（如“them”, “through unnecessary papers”应为“throw”），句子可更简洁且用连接词衔接步骤。提供一两项具体方法或频率会更好。

예시: I tidy my desk right after I finish working: I put stationery back in drawers and throw away unnecessary papers. I also file important documents into labeled folders and spend five minutes each evening straightening things up.

제안: 观点明确但句子不够流畅，存在语法错误（如“think it necessary”, “because of tidy environment”）。避免重复（"so"多次），用更自然的连接词并给出具体结果或例子。

예시: Yes, I think being tidy is important because a clean environment helps me concentrate. For instance, when my desk is organized I can find documents quickly, which reduces stress and helps me work more efficiently.

× So it doesn't bother to me.

✓ So it doesn't bother me.

中文解释：该句中“to me”位置多余且用法不正确。动词短语“bother someone”直接加宾语，不需要“to”。建议：直接使用“bother me”。

× I used to clean my room regularly when I was a child because my parents always encouraged me to keep things tidy. I enjoyed organizing my toys and books in order and I'll before guests came as it made a good impression.

✓ I used to clean my room regularly when I was a child because my parents always encouraged me to keep things tidy. I enjoyed organizing my toys and books in order and I did so before guests came as it made a good impression.

中文解释：原句中“I'll before guests came”时态和结构错误。“I'll”是“ I will”的缩写，不符合过去习惯的描述。此处需要过去式或过去习惯表达，使用“did so”或“would”更合适。建议：描述过去习惯时，用“used to”或过去式（did/ would）并保持时态一致。

× I usually tidy up my desk as soon as I finish using them, so I put items back in their place and through unnecessary papers and rubbish.

✓ I usually tidy up my desk as soon as I finish using it, so I put items back in their place and throw away unnecessary papers and rubbish.

中文解释：有两个问题：1) 主语“my desk”为单数，后面却用“them”，应使用“it”。2) 动词“through”拼写错误且用法不当，应为“throw away”表示丢弃。建议：注意代词与先行词数的一致性，并检查常见动词拼写与固定搭配。

× I also organize my documents into folders and I spend a few minutes at the end of each day to keep the workplace neat.

✓ I also organize my documents into folders and spend a few minutes at the end of each day to keep my workspace neat.

中文解释：句子中“and I spend”虽不一定错误，但与前半部分并列时可省略第二个主语“I”以显得更自然；另外“workplace”在此更常用“workspace”或“desk/work area”，并补上所有格“my”。建议：并列动词可省主语以提高流畅度，并使用更自然的名词短语。

× Yes, I think it necessary to keep things clean because of tidy environment helps me stay focused and productive.

✓ Yes, I think it is necessary to keep things clean because a tidy environment helps me stay focused and productive.

中文解释：原句缺少系动词“is”（“I think it necessary”是不完整的结构）且“because of tidy environment”结构不正确，应为“because a tidy environment”。建议：在形容词前补系动词，使用冠词并调整短语顺序，使句子结构完整。

× For example, when my desk is organized, I can find things quickly and spend less time searching, so I feel so I will not distracted by other things.

✓ For example, when my desk is organized, I can find things quickly and spend less time searching, so I won't be distracted by other things.

中文解释：原句中“so I feel so I will not distracted by other things”语序混乱且缺少被动语态的助动词和过去分词。需要使用“won't be distracted”来表达“不会被分心”。建议：用完整的否定将来被动结构“will not be distracted”或缩写“won't be distracted”，并删除多余的“so I feel so”。