Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, correct minor grammar (subject-verb agreement), avoid slight redundancy, and add a brief specific example to make it more vivid. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I do. I usually tidy my room and clear my desk every evening because a clean space helps me concentrate. For instance, I sort my books and put cables in a drawer so I can start work without searching for things.

제안: Good structure and specific details about routines and rewards. Improve by linking ideas more smoothly (use connectors), correcting tense consistency, and tightening the answer to avoid repetition. Add one brief example showing the habit in action.

예시: Yes, I did. My mum encouraged simple routines like making my bed and organizing toys, and she rewarded me when I kept things tidy, so the habit stuck. For example, I used to arrange my toy cars by size every night.

제안: You give useful routines and storage solutions, but there is an unclear phrase (“something board boxes”) and a few grammar issues. Be specific and use clear vocabulary; use linking words to connect routines and reasons. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I clear my desk every morning and again in the evening to maintain focus. I use shallow boxes and small containers for stationery, cables and important papers, so I can find items quickly and avoid clutter.

제안: Strong, concise answer with a clear opinion and a concrete example. To improve further, avoid repeating earlier phrasing and add a brief contrast or consequence to deepen the response (use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘therefore’).

예시: Yes, I think it is necessary because an orderly environment improves focus and creativity. For example, when my desk is organized I feel calm and can work much more efficiently, so I complete tasks faster.

× Keeping things neat help me become more focused and improve my mood.

✓ Keeping things neat helps me become more focused and improves my mood.

Subject-verb agreement error: the gerund phrase 'Keeping things neat' functions as a singular subject, so the verb must be singular ('helps' not 'help'). Also the coordinated verb 'improve' should agree with the singular subject and be 'improves'. Use singular verbs with singular subjects to fix this. Suggestion: Treat gerund phrases as singular subjects and use singular verbs (he/she/it form).

× I also put something board boxes and small containers for stationery, cables and important papers which help me find things quickly and keep the area tidy.

✓ I also put some board boxes and small containers for stationery, cables and important papers, which help me find things quickly and keep the area tidy.

Multiple issues: 'something board boxes' is incorrect word choice and likely intended 'some board boxes' or 'cardboard boxes' (chosen correction uses 'board boxes' to minimal change to match instruction 2 but better is 'cardboard boxes'). Also missing comma before the non-restrictive clause 'which help...' and subject-verb agreement: 'which help' correctly matches plural 'boxes and small containers'. Suggestion: Use 'some' or the correct noun 'cardboard boxes' and insert a comma before 'which' when giving extra information.