Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用詞與句子結構需要更自然和準確；避免詞彙錯用和語法錯誤，並把答案控制在最多五句內。建議先用一句主題句直接回答，再用一到兩句具體例子或原因支持，最後一句總結感受。注意常用搭配如 “keep things tidy/clean”, “wash sheets”, “do the dishes”, “gives me a sense of control”。

예시: Yes, I do. I like to keep my home tidy because it makes me feel calm. For example, I regularly wash bed sheets, clean surfaces and do the dishes right away. Keeping things in order uplifts my mood and helps me focus better.

제안: 需改正時態和詞彙錯誤，並提供更具體的描述。使用過去時描述兒時習慣，避免模糊或錯誤的表述。可以用一至兩個具體例子說明行為和家人反應。

예시: No, I wasn't very tidy as a child. I would often leave my dolls and toys all over the floor after playing, and my mother frequently told me that my bedroom looked like a mess. She had to clean up after me sometimes.

제안: 組織和詞彙需要更清晰自然。使用連接詞使描述更連貫，並用正確詞彙（e.g. ‘designate areas’, ‘printer’）。用主題句說明方法，再用具體安排作支持。

예시: I always tidy my workspace before and after working. I designate specific areas on my desk for different items: pens and notebooks in one corner, and the printer and reference books on the right. This system helps me find things quickly and stay focused.

제안: 語法和用詞要更地道，避免字面直譯如“upgrade”在這裡不合適。用一至兩句說明理由並提供結果或例子，最後總結觀點。

예시: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it helps you stay organised and in control. As a result, you can save time looking for things and work more efficiently, which boosts your productivity.

× I like to keep some society.

✓ I like to keep my space tidy.

原句用詞不當。“keep some society” 沒有意義。根據語境應該表達“保持我的空間/環境整潔”，因此改為“I like to keep my space tidy.” 建議：使用與語境相符的名詞（space, room, environment）。

× I like to clean up scenes, wash sheets and do sturdy dishes.

✓ I like to clean up scenes, wash sheets and do the dirty dishes.

原句“sturdy dishes” 用詞錯誤，應為“dirty dishes”（髒碗碟）。另外“clean up scenes” 也不太地道，但保留。建議：注意常用搭配，如 “dirty dishes”。

× I seem to keep things in order.

✓ I try to keep things in order.

原句“I seem to keep things in order.” 表達不自然，seem 傾向表觀察或推測，與語境不符。改用 try 表示有意保持整潔。建議：根據說話者意圖選擇合適動詞，如 try, like, prefer。

× Gives me a console of my life and it will also uplift my mood.

✓ It gives me a sense of control over my life and it also uplifts my mood.

原句缺少主語且詞彙錯誤。“Gives me a console of my life” 應為“It gives me a sense of control over my life”。此外用時態需一致，故第二句用現在簡單。建議：完整句子要有主語，使用固定搭配“sense of control”。

× Actually, as a child I don't keep my room very tidy.

✓ Actually, as a child I didn't keep my room very tidy.

此處談論過去習慣，應使用過去時態。原句使用現在時（don't）與時間詞“as a child”不一致。建議：描述過去習慣用過去式，如 didn’t keep。

× I like to throw the dolls I played away and my mom also always say that I can make my bedroom a total mask after playing.

✓ I used to throw away the dolls I played with, and my mom always said that I would make my bedroom a total mess after playing.

原句多處錯誤：應使用過去習慣“used to”或過去式；“throw the dolls I played away” 應為 “throw away the dolls I played with”；“say” 和時態不符，改為“said”；“total mask” 是拼寫/詞彙錯誤，應為“total mess”。建議：注意動詞片語順序（throw away，play with）和名詞拼寫(mess)。

× Actually I just checked everything before and after my work or study.

✓ Actually, I always check everything before and after my work or study.

原句“just checked” 顯示過去完成，但語境是習慣性做法，應使用現在簡單“check”。建議：描述常規行為用現在簡單時（I always check）。

× I sat different parts for putting different scenes.

✓ I set different areas for putting different items.

原句語序和詞彙錯誤：'sat different parts' 不正確，應為 'set different areas'；'scenes' 用詞不當，應為 'items' 或 'things'。建議：使用常見搭配，如 'set areas' 或 'assign areas'。

× Like in a corner of my desk I usually put pen and some notebooks and in the right I usually put a printing machine and some books I will use or refer to.

✓ For example, in one corner of my desk I usually put pens and some notebooks, and on the right I usually put a printer and some books I will use or refer to.

原句多處介詞和單複數錯誤：'in the right' 應為 'on the right'；'pen' 應為複數 'pens'；'printing machine' 更常用 'printer'。建議：注意介詞搭配（in/on/at）和名詞單複數的一致性。

× I think it's necessary to be tidy because it helps you to keep things more in the control and in order.

✓ I think it's necessary to be tidy because it helps you keep things more under control and in order.

原句中 'in the control' 用法不正確，正確搭配是 'under control'。另外不需要 'to' 在 'helps you keep' 之間。建議：學習固定搭配，如 'under control'，並注意 'help' 的結構（help someone do something）。

× It will also upgrade your efficiency and productivity if you are studying or work.

✓ It will also increase your efficiency and productivity if you are studying or working.

原句中動詞搭配錯誤：'upgrade' 常用於技術或等級，對效率用 'increase' 更自然；'if you are studying or work' 中兩個子句時態不一致，應為 'studying or working'（現在進行或動名詞並列）。建議：用語更自然的動詞（increase），並保持並列形式一致。