Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且含义清楚，但可更自然、更简洁，并加入连接词与具体描述来丰富内容。建议用一句主题句后补充一到两句具体细节或例子，避免重复表达。比如说明你是怎样保持整洁或整洁带来的具体好处。

예시: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because I study better in a clean environment. For example, I clear my desk each morning and keep my books in a small shelf so I can focus on my work.

제안: 时态和表达有错误（应使用过去时），句子较啰嗦。建议用过去时的主题句，再用一两句具体例子说明频率或原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I did. When I was a child I always tidied my room because my parents insisted on it. For example, I put my toys back in their box every evening and made my bed before dinner.

제안: 回答含糊且有多处语言错误（语法、词汇使用不当）。建议先用一句清晰的主题句说明你的整理方法，然后用具体步骤或细节支持，注意主谓一致和正确词汇（e.g. label, shelf, put away）。

예시: I tidy my study area at the end of each day. I put books and papers back on labeled shelves, file important documents in folders, and wipe the desk surface to keep it neat.

제안: 观点明确，但用词不当（“promotes affinity”不自然）和语法错误（主谓一致）。建议用更贴切的词汇如 "improves mood" 或 "reduces stress"，并用连接词扩展原因或结果，保持句子简洁。

예시: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it reduces stress and improves concentration. For example, when my desk is organized I can find documents quickly and focus on studying without distractions.

× Yes, I do like to keep things tidy because I need a clean environment to study.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy because I need a clean environment to study.

句子使用现在时表达一般喜好时，通常用一般现在时（如“I like”）而不是强调助动词“do”除非要强调或对比。建议直接使用“I like”。（简体中文）

× Yes, I usually keep my room daily as a child because my parents insist on a clean environment and check it every day.

✓ Yes, I usually kept my room tidy when I was a child because my parents insisted on a clean environment and checked it every day.

原句描述过去的习惯，应该使用过去时。动词“keep/insist/check”需改为过去式“kept/insisted/checked”。此外，‘usually keep my room daily’结构不自然，改为“usually kept my room tidy”。（简体中文）

× I always study my study here at the end of each day by putting our books and papers in labeled fronts and wiping the tags so far.

✓ I always tidy my study at the end of each day by putting my books and papers in labeled folders and wiping the surfaces.

原句有多处问题：1) “study my study”重复且不合适，应为“tidy my study”或“clean my study”；2) “labeled fronts”应为“labeled folders”（标签文件夹）；3) “wiping the tags so far”不通顺，应为“wiping the surfaces”或“wiping the desk”。此外保持现在习惯用一般现在时。（简体中文）

× Yes, I believe being tidy is necessary because it promotes affinity and reduce stress.

✓ Yes, I believe being tidy is necessary because it promotes efficiency and reduces stress.

原句中“affinity”用词不当，应为“efficiency”（效率）或“productivity”；另外主语“it”对应单数，谓语动词应为第三人称单数“reduces”。建议使用“promotes efficiency and reduces stress”。（简体中文）

× For example, a tidy workspace helps you find documents quickly and concentrate better.

✓ For example, a tidy workspace helps you find documents quickly and concentrate better.

该句本身语法正确，使用一般现在时表达普遍事实，故无需改动。说明：保持一般现在时以表达事实或常态。（简体中文）