Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good direct response and clear reasons. To improve, make the language more concise and natural by avoiding repetition (e.g., 'surroundings are clean' and 'tidy desk' convey similar ideas). Add a short linking phrase to connect ideas and vary vocabulary slightly.

예시: Yes, I do. I find a clean environment helps me stay focused, so I always tidy my desk after working to avoid distractions and keep my space organized.

제안: The answer addresses the question but has grammar errors, informal phrasing and some unclear parts (e.g., 'tidy up Cam', 'Need to improve my study efficiency'). Improve by using past tense consistently, correcting phrasing, and providing a brief linked explanation of the change.

예시: No, I wasn't. As a child my clothes and toys were often scattered on the floor. However, as I grew older I realized that being tidy helps me concentrate, so now I keep my room organized to improve my study efficiency.

제안: Clear, specific actions are described, which is good. To improve, reduce filler words like 'actually' and 'besides', and vary verbs (e.g., 'put away', 'store', 'wipe'). Also ensure conciseness by grouping daily and weekly routines with linking words.

예시: I usually tidy up immediately after studying: I put away pens and books and wipe my desk. I also sweep the floor daily and change the sheets weekly, which helps me feel more comfortable and focused.

제안: The opinion is clear but contains grammar mistakes and informal language ('messing room', 'it's just depends'). Improve by correcting grammar, using clearer contrast language, and giving a short example to support the view.

예시: I think being tidy is helpful but not strictly necessary, because some people concentrate better in a messy room. It depends on personal habits; what's important is finding the environment that helps you be most productive.

× Yes I do. I feel more comfortable and organized when my surroundings are clean. A tidy desk helps me concentrate better on my tasks without distractions, so I've gotten into the habit of tidying up.

✓ Yes, I do. I feel more comfortable and organized when my surroundings are clean. A tidy desk helps me concentrate better on my tasks without distractions, so I've gotten into the habit of tidying up.

No grammatical error found that matches the provided problem type list; only missing comma after 'Yes' which is punctuation, not listed as a grammar problem. No correction needed under the specified grammar categories.

× No I didn't, I was a messy kid and my clothes and toys are always scattered on the floor.

✓ No, I didn't. I was a messy kid and my clothes and toys were always scattered on the floor.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. 'I was a messy kid' is past, so 'are always scattered' should be past: 'were always scattered'. Keep tense consistent when referring to past habitual states. Suggestion: Use past tense throughout when describing childhood habits.

× However, since I grew up I realized that tidy up Cam helps me focus on my studies better.

✓ However, since I grew up I realized that tidying up my room helps me focus on my studies better.

Multiple issues: 'tidy up Cam' appears to be a typo and should be 'tidying up my room'. After 'realized that' the verb should be in -ing form when referring to the activity as a noun (gerund): 'tidying up'. Also 'Cam' is incorrect; likely 'room'. Suggestion: Replace incorrect word and use gerund after 'realized that'. Note: If expressing present truth after growing up, 'I have realized' is also acceptable.

× So now I keep my space. Need to improve my study efficiency.

✓ So now I keep my space tidy. I need to improve my study efficiency.

Fragment 'Need to improve my study efficiency' lacks a subject — sentence without a verb or missing subject. Also 'keep my space' is awkward; add 'tidy' to be clear. Suggestion: Provide a subject ('I') and complete verb phrase.

× Actually, I do a quick clean up after I finish my studies.

✓ Actually, I do a quick clean-up after I finish my studies.

Hyphenation 'clean-up' as a noun is preferable. Grammatically this sentence is acceptable, but the problem list includes verb + -ing; no change required except punctuation. If intended as verb phrase, 'clean up' (two words) is okay: 'I quickly clean up after I finish my studies.' Suggestion: Decide noun ('a quick clean-up') or verb ('I quickly clean up').

× For example, I will put away my pens and books after I use them.

✓ For example, I put away my pens and books after I use them.

Mixes future 'will' with a habitual action; use simple present for routine: 'I put away' or 'I always put away'. Suggestion: Use simple present to describe habitual actions.

× Besides, I sweep and mop the floor every day and change my bed sheets every week.

✓ Besides, I sweep and mop the floor every day and change my bed sheets every week.

Sentence is grammatically correct for habitual actions in simple present. No change needed. Included to indicate no matching error from list.

× This really makes me feel at ease.

✓ This really makes me feel at ease.

No grammar error; sentence correctly uses simple present to describe a general effect.

× Actually I think being tidy is helpful but not necessary because someone actually work better in a messing room.

✓ Actually, I think being tidy is helpful but not necessary because some people actually work better in a messy room.

Errors: 'someone' should be 'some people' to refer generally; 'work' needs third-person singular agreement with 'someone' (works) but with 'some people' use 'work'; 'messing' is wrong form, should be adjective 'messy'. Suggestion: Use 'some people' and 'messy' to express the idea correctly.

× So it's just depends on personal habits.

✓ So it just depends on personal habits.

Incorrect insertion of 'is' with 'depends'. Correct structure is 'it depends'. Remove 'is'. Suggestion: Use 'it depends on' for conditional dependence.

× Everyone has their own way to stay productive.

✓ Everyone has their own way of staying productive.

'Way to stay productive' is understandable but more natural is 'way of staying productive' or 'ways to stay productive'. Using 'their' with 'everyone' is acceptable in modern usage; no pronoun error according to list. Suggestion: Prefer 'way of staying' for smoother phrasing.