Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Mejorar la naturalidad y la gramática: evita construcciones literales del español (‘helps to me’, ‘more easy’) y usa orden lógico. Mantén la respuesta breve (máx. 3–4 frases), usa una frase tema y una o dos frases de apoyo concretas. Ejemplo de corrección de gramática a practicar: 'It helps me find things more easily' y añadir una razón concreta.

예시: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find things more easily. For example, when my desk is organized I can finish tasks faster and I don’t waste time looking for documents.

제안: Mejorar la precisión gramatical y el vocabulario: evita traducciones literales como ‘I was a disaster’ y estructura la respuesta con una frase tema y detalles. Reemplaza muletillas (‘umm’) y usa conectores como ‘because’ o ‘so’. Practica decir: 'No, I wasn’t very tidy as a child' y dar una razón concreta.

예시: No, I wasn’t very tidy as a child. My room was usually messy because I preferred playing to cleaning, so my family often asked me to tidy up.

제안: Mejorar coherencia y completar ideas: evita repeticiones (‘what what’, ‘in in’) y completa los ejemplos. Usa un tema claro seguido de pasos concretos y conectores (e.g., 'usually', 'for example'). Practica decir procesos específicos (clear desk, use boxes, daily routine).

예시: It depends on the day, but usually I keep my study space organized by putting papers in folders and putting pens in a cup. For example, I clear my desk every evening so it’s ready for the next day.

제안: Mejorar gramática y precisión léxica: corrige estructuras como 'more easier' y 'you has'; usa vocabulario natural ('more easily', 'at hand'). Mantén una frase tema más uno o dos apoyos específicos (por qué y ejemplo).

예시: Yes, I think it’s necessary because being tidy helps me manage my time better. For example, when my books and notes are at hand I can start studying immediately and avoid wasting time.

× Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps to me to find my things more easy.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it helps me find my things more easily.

The preposition 'to' after 'helps' is unnecessary in English; the structure is 'helps me do something'. Also 'more easy' is incorrect: use the adverb 'more easily' to modify the verb 'find'. Suggestion: use 'helps me find' and change the adjective to an adverb 'easily'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× No, absolutely no. When I was a child I was a disaster and my room was always, umm, a disaster. And it was a problem because my family always wanted that I be more tidy.

✓ No, absolutely not. When I was a child I was a disaster and my room was always, umm, a mess. And it was a problem because my family always wanted me to be tidier.

Use 'absolutely not' instead of 'absolutely no' for negation. 'A disaster' for a person is informal; 'a mess' fits for a room. The phrase 'wanted that I be' is ungrammatical in English: use 'wanted me to be'. Use comparative 'tidier' rather than 'more tidy'. Suggestions: use 'wanted me to be tidier' and prefer 'a mess' for the room description. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× It depends of the day and what what I am doing at this moment, but in general I like to keep my things in in order, especially the thing that I use the most, for example my.

✓ It depends on the day and what I am doing at the moment, but in general I like to keep my things in order, especially the things that I use the most, for example my phone.

Use the preposition 'depends on' not 'depends of'. Remove duplicate words 'what what' and duplicate 'in in'. 'At this moment' is better as 'at the moment'. 'The thing that I use the most' should be plural 'the things that I use the most'. The sentence ended abruptly with 'for example my.' Provide a complete example such as 'my phone'. Suggestions: 'depends on', avoid word duplication, make nouns plural when referring to multiple items, and finish examples. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yeah, for me it is very necessary because you can feel more organized with your times and with your schedule. Everything comes more easier if you has all the things you need for work, for study at the hand.

✓ Yeah, for me it is very necessary because you can feel more organized with your time and your schedule. Everything becomes easier if you have all the things you need for work or study at hand.

Use singular 'time' not 'times' when referring to one's schedule. 'Comes more easier' is ungrammatical: use 'becomes easier' or 'is easier'. 'Has' is incorrect for the second person; use 'have'. 'For study at the hand' is awkward: use 'for work or study at hand' or 'at hand'. Also avoid 'more' with comparative 'easier'. Suggestions: use 'becomes easier', 'have', 'time', and 'at hand'. Grammar problem type ID: 6}]}