Tidiness— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答清晰自然，表明了立场并给出了一些具体行为，但可以更简洁并加入连接词和更多具体细节，例如频率或方式，以显得更有说服力。建议把句子控制在不超过5句，首句直接回应问题，随后用连接词展开细节并给出具体例子或频率。

예시: Yes, I do. A tidy environment helps me concentrate, so I clean my room and organize my desk every weekend. For example, I sort papers into folders and put books on the shelf, which makes it easier to find things when I study.

제안: 回答有明确意思，但存在语法和表达问题（时态、主谓一致和被动/主动混用），以及细节不够具体。建议改正时态和词形，使用连接词说明原因和频率，并给出一个具体童年习惯的例子。

예시: Yes, I did. I always kept my desk tidy because I spent a lot of time there doing homework. My mother also encouraged me by reminding me to put toys away, so I developed the habit of sorting my stationery into small boxes every evening.

× Yes, absolutely. I find a tidy environment makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, so I usually clean my room and organize my desk.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I find a tidy environment makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, so I usually clean my room and organize my desk.

此句原文语法正确。动词时态和主谓一致均正确，表达清晰，因此无需修改。

× When I was a child, I always organize my desk and keep it tidy because it was where I spent most of my time and my mother always clean my floor.

✓ When I was a child, I always organized my desk and kept it tidy because it was where I spent most of my time, and my mother always cleaned my floor.

存在过去时使用错误。句子描述的是过去习惯，应使用一般过去时：organize → organized，keep → kept，clean → cleaned。另外在两个并列分句之间加逗号并用 and 连接更自然。建议把所有表示过去的动词都改为过去式，以保持时态一致。