Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: この質問には明確な肯定か否定の応答を最初に示し、その理由や具体的な記憶を一つか二つ添えると良いです。たとえば遊んだアクティビティ、誰と行ったか、どんな設備があったかを短く述べ、つながり語（because, so, for example）で説明を整えましょう。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I often played there with my friends. For example, we used to climb the trees and play football on the grass, which made weekends really fun.

제안: 現在の気持ちをはっきり伝え、頻度や理由を具体的に述べると良いです。現在のライフスタイル（仕事、家族）や公園での活動（散歩、ジョギング、ピクニック）が回答の根拠になります。接続語（now, because, usually）を使って流れを良くしましょう。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now because I often go for walks to relax after work. Usually I visit the nearest park twice a week to jog or read on a bench.

제안: 意見の是非をはっきり述べ、その理由と期待する効果（健康、環境、コミュニティ）を示しましょう。もし増やしたいならどのような場所や施設が欲しいか具体例を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for exercise. For instance, small neighborhood parks with playgrounds and walking paths would be very helpful for families.

제안: 未来の予定や希望を具体的に述べ、どの公園か（名前や特徴）やそこで何をしたいかを伝えましょう。もし特定の公園を知らない場合は、どんなタイプの公園に行きたいか（botanical gardens, national parksなど）を示すと良いです。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden next month because I enjoy seeing rare plants and taking photos. I hope to spend an afternoon exploring the greenhouses and walking the themed trails.

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I did.

The original answer 'I don't know' does not directly address the past-tense question 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' A full, grammatically appropriate response should use past tense. Use 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' to match the auxiliary 'did' in the question. Suggestion: answer using past tense auxiliaries (did/didn't) and add a brief explanation if needed, e.g. 'Yes, I did. I enjoyed visiting parks with my family.'

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I do.

The question 'Do you still like going to parks now?' requires a present tense response. 'I don't know' is noncommittal and does not use the appropriate present simple form. Use 'Yes, I do.' or 'No, I don't.' to match the present simple question. Suggestion: respond with 'I do' or 'I don't' and provide a short reason, e.g. 'Yes, I do. I go to the park every weekend.'

× I don't know

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' uses the modal 'would' and expects a modal response. 'I don't know' fails to match that structure. Use 'Yes, I would' or 'No, I wouldn't' or a full sentence with 'would like' to show preference. Suggestion: reply 'Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because...'.

× I don't know

✓ Yes, there are some parks I want to go to in the future.

The question 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' asks about future intention or plans. The response should reference desire/plan using present simple for stative verbs or future constructions: 'Yes, there are' or 'Yes, I want to visit...' 'I don't know' does not commit and does not match the existential 'Are there...'. Suggestion: use 'Yes, there are' or 'Yes, I want to visit the new botanical garden next year.'

× I don't know

✓ Yes, there is a park I want to visit in the future.

Because the question uses 'Are there any parks...', a grammatically aligned answer should use the 'there is/there are' structure. 'I don't know' avoids this structure. Use 'Yes, there is...' for a singular park or 'Yes, there are...' for multiple parks. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes, there is a park I want to visit next summer.'