Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and direct by starting with a clear topic sentence, correcting articles/plurals, and adding one specific detail about activities. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and use a linking word if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to play outside there with my friends most afternoons, especially playing hide-and-seek and flying kites, which I remember fondly.

제안: Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid redundancy ("definitely" + "I enjoy" similar), and add a specific example of an activity you do there. Use a linking phrase to connect reasons.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, I often walk with my parents and we have picnics there, so we can talk and relax together.

제안: Answer the question directly (state whether you would like more parks), then give brief reasons with specific details. Correct plural/article errors and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green space. For instance, more small neighborhood parks would make it easier for people to exercise and walk their dogs near home.

제안: Respond directly to the question by naming a particular park or type of park you want to visit, correct grammar (singular/plural, tenses), avoid repeated phrases, and give a specific reason or plan using a linking word.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that just opened. I plan to take my family there for a picnic because it has a playground for children and scenic walking paths.

× When I was a child I liked going to park because I used to play outside there with my friends most afternoons

✓ When I was a child I liked going to parks because I used to play outside there with my friends most afternoons

The noun 'park' should be plural 'parks' when speaking generally about going to such places as a child. Use plural for countable nouns when referring to them in general. Suggestion: use 'parks' or include an article: 'going to the park' if referring to a specific park.

× Yes, definitely I like going to parks now, especially in my spare time with my parents because we have a lot of fun together and I enjoy spending some quality time with them.

✓ Yes, definitely I like going to parks now, especially in my spare time with my parents because we have a lot of fun together and I enjoy spending quality time with them.

The sentence is largely correct tense-wise, but 'spending some quality time' is redundant; 'spending quality time' is more natural. Tenses are consistent: present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: remove 'some' for conciseness and natural phrasing.

× Yes, there are different kinds of parks in my cities such as public parks, local parks, ride parks and people love to go there for exercise and walking.

✓ Yes, there are different kinds of parks in my city such as public parks, local parks, and amusement parks, and people love to go there for exercise and walking.

'My cities' is incorrect if the speaker means one city; use singular 'my city'. Also 'ride parks' is not natural; 'amusement parks' or 'theme parks' is the correct plural term. Commas and conjunctions added for clarity. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural nouns and common collocations like 'amusement parks'.

× Well, public parks is very popular in my city. I will definitely want to go there with my family because I love to spend some quality time with them and if I get opportunity I definitely will go

✓ Well, public parks are very popular in my city. I will definitely want to go there with my family because I love to spend quality time with them and if I get the opportunity I definitely will go.

The subject 'public parks' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also add the article 'the' before 'opportunity' and remove redundant 'some' in 'some quality time' for natural phrasing. Ensure sentence ends with a period. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and include necessary articles.