Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. Kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun, sonra bir veya iki destekleyici cümleyle nedenini belirtin. Gereksiz tekrar ve dolgu sözcüklerinden (uh, umm) kaçının. Örnek: geçmiş tense için 'liked' kullanın, duyguyu açıkça ifade edin ve bir anekdot ekleyin.

예시: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they made me feel very happy. I especially remember spending afternoons on the swings with my friends, which was always exciting.

제안: Cevap daha net ve tam cümlelerle olmalı. Zaman ifadelerini doğru kullanın ('free time' without article is fine but 'in my free time' is better). Tekrarı azaltın ve sebep belirtirken daha spesifik olun. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. In my free time I prefer to go there because it's a peaceful place to relax and get some fresh air.

제안: Cümle yapısı ve mantıksal bütünlük geliştirilmelidir. Koşul cümlelerinde doğru yapıyı kullanın ('if the city had more parks' veya 'I would like more parks because...'). Destekleyici nedenleri açık ve tamamlanmış cümlelerle verin.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because if the city had more green spaces, children would have safer places to play and families could enjoy outdoor activities together.

제안: Cümleleriniz daha akıcı ve dilbilgisi açıdan doğru olmalı. Yer bildiren ifadelerde 'near my home' doğru ama tamamlayıcı fiil gerektirir ('there is a park near my home'). Destekleyici detayları mantıklı sırayla verin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

예시: Yes, there is a park near my home that I want to visit more often. I like it because it has a large green area where children can play safely, and I enjoy watching them play.

× Yes, I like to going to park when I was a child feels me so, uh happy when I'm gonna going to park and I miss these days.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child. It made me very happy when I went to the park, and I miss those days.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms. Use simple past 'liked' and 'went' for past habits. 'Like to going' is incorrect; use 'liked going' or 'used to go'. 'Feels me so happy' should be 'it made me very happy'. 'I'm gonna going to park' is informal and ungrammatical; use 'I went to the park'. Also use plural 'parks' or 'the park' consistently and 'those days' for past period reference.

× Yes, uh, still I like going to parks now, umm, if I have a free time, I prefer to. I prefer go to park because I spend time and come.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now. If I have free time, I prefer to go to the park because I can spend time there and relax.

Use present simple 'I still like' for current preference. 'A free time' should be 'free time' (uncountable). 'Prefer to' needs an infinitive: 'prefer to go'. 'Go to park' requires article 'the park' or plural 'parks'. 'I spend time and come' is unclear; replace with 'I can spend time there and relax' to convey meaning.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because if city have a lot of park and children have a lot of park and children can.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because if the city had a lot of parks, children could play more.

The sentence uses incorrect verb forms and lacks articles. Use conditional past 'had' with 'would like' context: 'if the city had a lot of parks'. 'City' needs 'the' and 'park' should be plural 'parks'. 'Children can' is incomplete; use 'children could play more' to complete the thought and match conditional mood.

× Yes, and this park near my home. I like this park because I have a good green area and children can play easily in there and I like to watch playing children.

✓ Yes, there is a park near my home. I like this park because it has a nice green area, children can play there easily, and I like to watch them play.

Use 'there is' to introduce existence of the park (there be issue). 'This park near my home' lacks verb; corrected with 'there is a park near my home'. 'I have a good green area' incorrectly uses 'I'; use 'it has a nice green area'. 'Play easily in there' should be 'play there easily' (preposition placement). 'Watch playing children' is awkward; use 'watch them play'.