Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha doğal ve dilbilgisel olarak doğru olmalı. Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun (ör. "Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child."), ardından bir veya iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Zamir ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ("when I was a child", "I used to"). Ayrıca gereksiz veya hatalı kelimeleri (ör. "some child") kullanmayın.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I used to go there almost every weekend with my parents, and I especially liked the playground where I could climb and play with other children.

제안: Cümle yapısı ve kelime düzeni üzerinde çalışın. Doğru fiil yapısını ve preposition kullanımını kullanın (ör. "I like them very much because I hang out with my friends"). Bir bağlaç kullanarak neden belirten cümlenizi bağlayın ve kısa ek detay verin. Ayrıca "hang out with" ifadesinde "with" eklemeyi unutmayın.

예시: Yes, I still like going to parks because I often hang out with my friends there. We usually sit on a bench, chat, and sometimes play frisbee.

제안: Daha doğal ve akıcı bir ifade kullanın. "Would you like" sorusuna cevap verirken koşul veya neden ekleyin (ör. "Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because..."). Nedenleri belirtmek için bağlaçlar (because, since, as) ve özgül örnekler verin (ör. daha fazla yeşil alan, aileler için alan).

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space and places for families to relax. For example, new small parks in residential areas would be very useful for children and elderly people.

제안: Cevap açık ama yanlış ifadeleri düzeltin. "No" yerine daha net ve doğal cümle kurun (ör. "No, I don't have any particular parks I want to visit in the future"). Gereksiz tekrar ve yanlış kelimeleri ("I I rent", "the my future") çıkarın. İsterseniz kısa bir neden veya alternatif ekleyin (ör. "because I usually go to nearby parks").

예시: No, I don't have any particular parks I want to visit in the future because I usually go to the nearby parks that are convenient for me. However, I would like to visit a famous botanical garden someday if I have the chance.

× Yes, I like going to parks as some child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

The student used present tense 'like' but the question asks about childhood (past), so past tense 'liked' is required. Also 'some child' is incorrect; use the definite phrase 'a child'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits (I liked going to parks as a child).

× Yes, I like very much because I hang out my friends.

✓ Yes, I like it very much because I hang out with my friends.

The student used present tense 'like' correctly for current preference but omitted the object 'it' after 'like' and omitted the preposition 'with' after 'hang out'. Also word order 'very much' should follow the verb. Suggestion: include the object and correct preposition: 'I like it very much because I hang out with my friends.'

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The original uses simple present 'I like to see' which sounds odd for a desire about future change. Use the modal 'would like' to express a polite desire about future or preference. Suggestion: use 'would like' for wishes and polite requests.

× No I I rent want to go any parks in the my future.

✓ No, I don't want to go to any parks in the future.

Multiple errors: duplicated 'I', incorrect 'rent' instead of 'don't', wrong negation and word order. Use auxiliary 'do' for negation in present simple: 'I don't want'. Include preposition 'to' after 'go' and article 'the' is unnecessary before 'future'. Suggestion: 'No, I don't want to go to any parks in the future.'