Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够相关和清晰。句子语法有误（时态与细节混淆），信息含糊（“planets”显然不合适），且过于简短没有支持细节。建议使用直接的主题句，接着用一两句具体细节说明为什么喜欢，并避免不相关词汇。

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and explored the flowerbeds with my friends, which made me feel happy and free.

제안: 回答完全偏离问题，含义不清且句子结构错误。应直接回答是否仍然喜欢去公园，并给出一两点具体理由或频率说明，使用连词连接观点和理由。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks regularly. I go there at least once a week to exercise and relax because the fresh air helps me unwind.

제안: 回答基本相关但不够具体，且句子重复且冗余。应先直接回答是否愿意，然后用具体理由（例如环境、健康、社交）并使用连接词使表达更连贯。避免简单陈述性评价“very good”。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and socialising. For example, more parks would make it easier for my friends and me to meet outdoors and stay active.

제안: 回答部分相关但信息组织混乱。学生提到未来计划但没有明确说明是否有特定公园想去。建议先明确回答（有或没有），再解释原因或替代计划，使用连接词衔接两部分内容。

예시: Not really — I don't have a specific park in mind because next year I'll be studying at CMU in Thailand. However, I plan to explore local parks near the university when I arrive to get to know the area.

× Sure, I'd like to go into parks and chat and there are many flowers and planets on there.

✓ Sure, I'd like to go to parks and chat, and there are many flowers and plants there.

句中有两个问题：1) “go into parks” 用法不自然，通常说 go to parks 表示去公园；2) “planets” 应为 “plants”（植物），语义错误但按题单只处理介词和词形。并且短语“on there” 不需要介词 on，直接用 there 即可。建议使用“go to parks”和“plants”，并把两个并列分句用逗号连接。

× Yes, I'm still not going to pass now. Husband is very good.

✓ Yes, I still go there now. My husband is very kind.

原句“I'm still not going to pass now.” 时态与语义不符，且含糊不清。将其改为现在时“I still go there now” 更契合询问是否现在仍喜欢去公园的语境。同时“Husband is very good.” 缺少冠词与恰当形容词，应为“My husband is very kind.”（注意加上所有格 my 和更合适的形容词）。这两个修改属于现在时使用和冠词/词类使用（按题单仅修改时态相关项）。

× I would like to see more parks in my city and I'm going to the park with my friends. I think it's very good.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city, and I'm going to the park with my friends. I think it's great.

句子结构基本正确，但在表达喜好时“very good” 可改为更自然的“great”。此处保留将来计划 use of 'I'm going to' 表示计划，时态与语境一致。主要修正为标点和更自然用词，确保句子流畅。

× There are not any parks I want to go to in the future 'cause I will go to CMU in Thailand to study the digital innovation.

✓ There aren't any parks I want to go to in the future because I will go to CMU in Thailand to study digital innovation.

1) 缩写和口语 'cause 在书面或正式回答中应改为 because。2) “There are not any” 更自然的否定形式是 “There aren't any”。3) “the digital innovation” 中的定冠词“the”不必要，通常说 study digital innovation。该句使用将来时“will go” 合适，因此按情态动词/将来时仅修改连词和冠词用法，使表达更自然。