Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct response with a clear opinion, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use a topic sentence and a linking word to expand. Keep it concise (1–4 sentences).

예시: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made those visits fun and memorable.

제안: State your current preference clearly, then explain why with a specific reason or example. Use a linking word (e.g., because, so, and) to connect ideas. Keep to a maximum of five sentences.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful place to relax. For instance, I go there to jog on weekends and often read a book under a tree.

제안: Answer directly whether you would like more parks and support it with a concrete reason and one example of a benefit (e.g., health, community). Use a linking word to make the answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve residents’ health and social life. For example, additional green spaces would give families more places to meet and children more safe areas to play.

제안: Give a specific future plan or preference, then explain why you want to visit that park using a linking word and one detail. This shows clarity and ability to talk about the future.

예시: I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because I enjoy seeing different plant species and taking photographs. Also, I’ve heard they host seasonal flower shows that would be interesting to see.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

The original sentence is grammatically correct as a short response, but lacks a final punctuation mark. This is not a pronoun error in content; however, the student repeatedly uses the same brief response which is acceptable English. Suggestion: when answering conversational questions, provide a fuller response to show comprehension, for example 'I'm not sure' or 'I don't know, I haven't thought about that.' Replace with a complete sentence and appropriate punctuation. Note: According to the provided Grammar_Problem_Type_List, the closest match is 'Incorrect use of pronouns' (ID 12) because 'I' is a pronoun, but there is no grammatical misuse.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

Same as above: the phrase is grammatically correct as a short answer but should include terminal punctuation. For clarity in a speaking test, expand to 'I'm not sure' or 'I don't know, I haven't thought about that.' The selected problem type ID 12 is used because the instruction required choosing an entry from the list; there is no actual pronoun error.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

Same correction and explanation as previous items. In spoken English, fuller answers are preferable: 'Yes, I would' or 'No, I wouldn't' depending on opinion. Punctuation added for written accuracy.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

Same as above: grammatically acceptable short response; add punctuation in writing and consider expanding the answer in speech to show engagement.