Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is too short and non-committal. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a clear opinion or statement, then add 1–2 brief supporting details using linking words. Aim for 2–4 sentences, use specific memories or reasons, and avoid “I don't know.”

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to go every weekend with my parents and play on the swings and feed the ducks, which made those outings really special.

제안: Again, avoid vague replies. Provide a direct answer (yes/no) and follow with reasons or current habits. Use a linking word such as “because” or “although” to connect your idea and a specific detail to support it.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are a peaceful place to exercise and relax. For instance, I often jog there in the mornings and sit by the lake to read on weekends.

제안: Give a clear stance and justify it with practical reasons (e.g., health, environment, community). Use linking words like “because” or “so” and add a concrete example or suggestion to make your answer specific.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe spaces for families. For example, adding small pocket parks in residential areas would give children places to play nearby.

제안: Provide a definite answer and include a named place or type of park and a reason you want to visit. Use linking words such as “because” or “so that” and offer a short plan or expectation to make the response concrete.

예시: Yes, I want to visit the riverside park that recently opened because it has a long walking trail and a botanical garden. I plan to go next month with friends so we can have a picnic and take photos.

× I don't know

✓ I’m not sure.

The original reply 'I don't know' is grammatically correct but is too abrupt and unnatural as a conversational answer to personal preference questions. The issue is one of sentence choice and register rather than a strict grammatical error; it functions as a sentence structure/pragmatics problem because it fails to fit the expected response form. 'I’m not sure' is a more natural, polite response to the examiner's questions about preferences or future intentions. Suggestion: use responses that match the conversational context, e.g. 'I’m not sure,' 'I don’t really remember,' or give a short explanation like 'I’m not sure; I didn’t go to parks much.'.