Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (use past tense), make a clear topic sentence, limit to 2–3 supporting details, and use linking words. Be specific about activities and feelings. For example, start with a clear past-tense sentence, then add one or two specific details linked with 'and' or 'because'.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often played football and tag with my friends, and we enjoyed running around because the air was fresh and there was plenty of space to play.

제안: Answer directly about current habits in present simple or present continuous. Avoid unrelated details (pub) unless relevant. Use linking words (but, or) and be specific about frequency and activities. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I still like going to parks. At the moment I usually go there to jog or walk with friends a few times a week, and I sometimes bring snacks to enjoy a picnic.

제안: Give a clear opinion (yes/no) and support with specific reasons and examples. Use correct articles and plural forms, and linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because on weekends many families visit parks to relax. For example, more small neighbourhood parks would give people convenient places to meet and exercise.

제안: Make the answer specific: name a park or type of park and explain why you want to visit it, using future forms correctly. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with linking phrase like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, in the future I would like to visit the large botanical garden near my home because it has many rare plants and peaceful walking paths, and I think it would be relaxing to spend an afternoon there.

× When I was young, I go to the park a lot and play game with my friend and running around the park it has fresh air.

✓ When I was young, I went to the park a lot, played games with my friends, and ran around the park because it had fresh air.

This sentence refers to past habitual actions, so verbs should be in the simple past (go -> went, play -> played, run -> ran). Also plural forms are needed for 'games' and 'friends' to match general meaning, and the clause about fresh air should be connected with a reason word (because) and use past tense 'had'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Dash, I will be going to the pub when I have spend free time for today and enjoy edible or running around the park with my friend.

✓ Today, I will go to the pub when I have free time, and I will enjoy food or run around the park with my friend.

Use 'will' with base verb forms for future actions (be going -> go is acceptable but keep consistent; 'have spend' is incorrect: after 'have' meaning 'have free time' there is no verb 'spend' needed; 'enjoy edible' is wrong: 'edible' is an adjective; use 'food' as a noun). Also ensure parallel structure for activities (enjoy food or run). Grammar problem type ID: 4

× I want to see more park in my country because when I weekend, people in my country like go to the park, enjoy with my family and enjoy.

✓ I want to see more parks in my country because on weekends, people here like to go to the park and enjoy time with their families.

Use plural 'parks' for countable plural meaning. 'When I weekend' is incorrect; use 'on weekends' for general habitual time. Use infinitive 'to go' after 'like'. 'Enjoy with my family' should be 'enjoy time with their families' or 'enjoy time with my family' depending on perspective; 'people in my country' -> 'people here' and match possessive ('their families'). Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I want to go into future. I want to be the one part near my home.

✓ In the future, I want to visit the nearby park that is close to my home.

Original sentences are unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'In the future' for time reference. 'I want to be the one part near my home' is not meaningful; clarify intention as visiting a park near the home. Use appropriate noun phrases ('nearby park' or 'a park close to my home'). Grammar problem type ID: 26