Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Correct tense (use past) and use plural/singular correctly.

예시: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because my parents and cousin took me there every weekend. We often played in the sandbox and on the swings, and those outings are some of my favorite childhood memories.

제안: Give a direct, relevant answer and avoid confusing or irrelevant remarks. Use present tense and explain reasons briefly with linking words. Remove emotional fillers and unclear references.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy visiting parks. I like exploring different parks when I travel because each one has unique features, such as gardens, playgrounds, or walking trails, which I find relaxing and fun.

제안: Respond directly with a clear opinion and give a specific reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler. Use correct noun forms and concise phrasing.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they give children safe places to play and help create positive childhood memories. Additionally, more green spaces would improve air quality and encourage community activities.

제안: Answer with present/future tense and be specific about which parks or types of parks you want to visit. Give one or two concrete reasons and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, I want to visit some famous parks in the future, such as Central Park in New York and Hyde Park in London, because I enjoy their landscapes and recreational facilities. I look forward to trying their walking paths and playgrounds.

× Of course, I like going to parks as a child.

✓ Of course, I liked going to parks as a child.

The question asks about past preference as a child, so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'liked' to match the time reference. Suggestion: Use past simple when referring to habits or feelings in the past (e.g., 'I liked playing outside as a child').

× Like, OK, I like as a child in the past because I usually go there with my cousin and with my parents on the weekend, playing in the sandboxes and playing on the swing and other things.

✓ I liked going to parks when I was a child because I usually went there with my cousin and my parents on the weekends, playing in sandboxes and on swings.

Multiple tense errors: 'like' should be past 'liked'; 'go' should be past 'went'; 'on the weekend' should be plural 'on the weekends'. Also streamline phrasing for natural English. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in the past when describing repeated past activities and use plural for regular occurrences ('on weekends').

× Oh, actually, I was a big fan of her park.

✓ Oh, actually, I was a big fan of that park.

Pronoun 'her' incorrectly refers to 'park'. Use demonstrative 'that' to refer to a specific park. Also verb tense 'was' is correct for past feeling. Suggestion: Use 'that' or 'the' to refer to a place rather than a possessive pronoun. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× So I actually still like going to parks now because I really want to travel around the world and try many other parks that are not really in my list.

✓ So I actually still like going to parks now because I really want to travel around the world and visit many parks that are not on my list yet.

Verb 'try' is awkward for visiting parks; 'visit' is more appropriate. 'Not really in my list' is incorrect phrase; use 'not on my list yet'. Tense 'still like' is correct for present preference. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs for activities (visit) and correct prepositional phrases ('on my list').

× But I'm interested though, and I'm like, I really want to go to the parks.

✓ But I'm interested, and I really want to go to the parks.

Unnecessary filler 'I'm like' is informal and redundant. Keep 'I'm interested' plus 'I really want' for clarity. Suggestion: Remove fillers and use clear present continuous or simple present statements. (Grammar problem type ID: 10)

× Oh my God.

✓ (This interjection is acceptable colloquially; no grammatical correction needed.)

'Oh my God' is an interjection expressing emotion and does not require grammatical change. Suggestion: In formal speech, use less strong exclamations if needed.

× Oh, I, I like, I would like, I really appreciate that.

✓ Oh, I would really like that; I would appreciate it.

Combine and clarify expressions. 'I like, I would like' is confusing; use 'I would like' for polite desire. 'Appreciate that' needs an object; use 'I would appreciate it.' Suggestion: Use modal 'would' for polite requests and ensure pronoun objects follow verbs. (Grammar problem type ID: 4)

× Like I really want to see more parks in my city because like I just want the children in my city to experience like such a good childhood memories for like the future in our city.

✓ I really want to see more parks in my city because I want the children here to have such good childhood memories for the future.

Errors: 'such a good childhood memories' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'memories' — remove 'a' or make singular. Repeated fillers 'like' unnecessary. 'In our city' redundant after 'my city'; use 'here' or 'in the future'. Suggestion: Use correct article-quantity agreement ('such good childhood memories') and eliminate fillers for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 14)

× Yes, there were like many, many parks that I want to go in the future because I really want to improve my yeah, childhood memories.

✓ Yes, there are many parks that I want to go to in the future because I really want to improve my childhood memories.

Tense inconsistency: use present 'are' to state current existence of parks you plan to visit; 'want to go in the future' needs 'go to'. Remove filler 'yeah'. 'Improve my childhood memories' is odd but kept — consider 'create more childhood memories'. Suggestion: Use present tense for current plans and correct verb-preposition combination 'go to'. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× Even though I'm lucky still a child, I really want to go to parks.

✓ Even though I'm still luckily a child, I really want to go to parks.

Word order and adverb use: 'lucky still a child' is incorrect. Better: 'I'm still lucky to be a child' or 'I'm still a child, luckily'. Suggestion: Place adverbs correctly and use infinitive after 'lucky' if needed. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Like I'm really excited playing on the swing, a slide and other things.

✓ I'm really excited about playing on the swings, the slide, and other things.

Use 'excited about' + gerund. Also pluralize 'swings' if general, and use articles correctly: 'the slide' or no article for general activities. Suggestion: Use 'excited about' before an -ing verb and ensure noun number consistency. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)