Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct response with a clear opinion and then add one or two concise supporting details. Aim for 2–4 short sentences, use linking words (e.g., "because" or "so") and include a specific memory or reason.

예시: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open space to play. For example, I often spent afternoons climbing trees and playing tag with neighbors, which helped me make friends.

제안: State your current preference clearly, then explain why with a specific reason and a brief example. Use a linking word like "however" or "because" to connect ideas and keep it to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For instance, I usually go for a 30-minute walk there twice a week to relax and stay fit.

제안: Answer directly (yes/no) and give a concise reason that includes a specific benefit (e.g., health, environment, community). Add one brief supporting example and use linking words such as "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for families to gather. For example, a new park near my neighborhood would give children a safe place to play and encourage people to exercise outdoors.

제안: Respond with a clear plan or preference and mention a specific named park or type of park you wish to visit. Explain briefly why and include a linking phrase like "for example" or "such as" to make it concrete.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the national botanical garden next spring because I enjoy plants and photography. For example, I want to see the seasonal flower displays and take photos of rare species.

× I don't know

✓ I don't know.

The original sentence is grammatically fine but lacks appropriateness for the context. The student repeatedly answers 'I don't know' to personal preference and future questions; this is not a grammatical error but a discourse/contextual issue. However, per the provided problem list, the closest match is 'Sentence structure errors' because the reply is contextually unacceptable. Suggestion: Provide relevant short answers that match the questions, for example: 'Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.' for past preference; 'Yes, I still enjoy going to parks.' for present; 'Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.' for willingness; 'Yes, I want to visit the central park in the future.' These corrected responses use appropriate tense and clarity and should replace 'I don't know.'