Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity: use past tense consistently, correct nouns and plural forms, remove fillers, and give one clear topic sentence plus one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") to make the answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go often with my cousins and other family friends, and we would spend hours running around and playing games because the parks had many playgrounds and open spaces.

제안: Make tense, articles and collocations accurate and combine similar ideas to avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect reasons and habits, and limit to up to five sentences.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I visit a park two or three times a week because I like the greenery and walking; it helps me relax and stay active in my free time.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct sentence structure. Be specific when comparing locations and avoid unclear phrases. State your opinion clearly, give a specific reason, and provide an example or fact if relevant.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. In the area where I live in Thailand there are very few parks, so adding small green spaces would improve residents' quality of life and provide places for exercise and relaxation.

제안: Use correct names and grammar, avoid short fragments, and link ideas smoothly. Provide one clear reason why you want to visit and a brief supporting detail or example.

예시: I would love to visit Central Park in New York. I have read about it and seen photos online; it looks very stunning and majestic, and I want to walk its paths and see the famous landmarks there.

× I do love going to park.

✓ I do love going to the park.

The noun 'park' is countable and singular here, so it needs a definite article 'the' when referring to parks in general experience or a particular park. Suggestion: use 'the park' or plural 'parks' depending on meaning.

× When I was younger I normally went to Parth with my cousin, my family and some friends.

✓ When I was younger I normally went to the park with my cousin, my family and some friends.

The verb 'went' is correct past tense, but 'Parth' is a typo for 'park'. Ensure correct spelling. Also article 'the' is required before a singular countable noun referring to a familiar place.

× I spend hours there running around and I just love, uh, when I, I go there and then they have so many.

✓ I spent hours there running around and I just loved going there; they had so many things to do.

The sentence mixes present tense 'spend' with past context 'When I was younger'. Use past tense 'spent' and 'loved'. The phrase 'when I, I go there' is awkward; use 'going there'. 'They have so many' is incomplete; specify 'things to do' or similar. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and complete the idea.

× I love going to parks. I went to park every week about two or three times.

✓ I love going to parks. I went to the park every week, about two or three times.

When referring to a habitual visit to a specific park, use 'the park'. If speaking generally, use plural 'parks'. Also add a comma before the time phrase. The verb 'went' is past tense which fits the past habit context.

× Going to park is like one of my hobbies.

✓ Going to the park is one of my hobbies.

Use 'the park' for the activity of visiting parks as a general hobby. Countable singular nouns require an article. Also remove 'like' which is unnecessary here.

× I would just go there on my free time.

✓ I would just go there in my free time.

The correct preposition with 'free time' is 'in' not 'on'. Also because 'free time' is uncountable, no article is needed. Suggestion: use 'in my free time' or 'during my free time'.

× Of course, honestly in Thailand, especially in the area where I live, there are not so many parks.

✓ Of course. Honestly, in Thailand, especially in the area where I live, there are not many parks.

'Not so many' is informal; 'not many' is clearer and more natural. Also add punctuation for clarity. The sentence structure otherwise is fine.

× The earlier parks I mentioned that I went to a tree to come per week is not in Thailand.

✓ The parks I mentioned that I used to go to each week are not in Thailand.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and confused. Use 'used to go to' for past habitual actions, 'each week' or 'per week' becomes 'each week', and plural 'parks...are' to match plural subject. Rearranged for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement.

× And I just read that in my country we have it.

✓ I also read that we have similar parks in my country.

The original 'I just read that in my country we have it' is vague and awkward. Clarify what 'it' refers to by saying 'similar parks', and use 'also' instead of starting with 'And'. This improves coherence.

× I want to go to New York Central Park.

✓ I want to go to New York's Central Park.

Use possessive 'New York's Central Park' or 'Central Park in New York' to show the relation. Alternatively 'New York Central Park' is nonstandard. Use the correct name 'Central Park' with a location marker.

× I have read about it, I have saw some picture online.

✓ I have read about it; I have seen some pictures online.

After 'have' we must use the past participle: 'seen' is the correct past participle of 'see' (not 'saw', which is simple past). Also plural 'pictures' is likely. Use punctuation to separate clauses.

× I think it are very stunning.

✓ I think it is very stunning.

Subject 'it' requires singular verb 'is', not 'are'. Ensure subject-verb agreement. If referring to 'parks' plural, use 'they are very stunning' instead.

× Majestic park.

✓ It is a majestic park.

'Majestic park' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb. Add a verb and subject to form a complete sentence: 'It is a majestic park.' Alternatively, integrate into previous sentence: 'I think it is a very majestic park.'

× So in the future if I have chance I would love to visit.

✓ So in the future, if I have the chance, I would love to visit.

Add the article 'the' before 'chance' ('the chance' or 'a chance'). Also add commas for conditional clause clarity. The conditional 'would love' is acceptable after 'if I have the chance' for polite hypothetical. Suggestion: 'if I get the chance' or 'if I have the opportunity' are alternatives.