Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and cohesive: start with a clear topic sentence, then add a couple of specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and vocabulary (e.g. 'skating' -> 'went skating'); avoid repetition. Keep answers concise (≤5 sentences).

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my classmates, and we would play on the swings and slides; sometimes we even went skating near the pond. Those visits were fun because we could run around freely and play games together.

제안: Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing: begin with a topic sentence, then explain changes in activities using linking words (e.g. 'but', 'now'). Use precise verbs ('stroll', 'relax') and correct continuous or simple forms. Keep it brief and natural.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I no longer use the swings or slides. Instead, I usually stroll through the paths to relax and clear my mind after a busy day.

제안: Make the answer more specific and cohesive: start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons and one concrete example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and provide a more developed response within three sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I prefer natural spaces to busy urban areas. For example, having nearby parks would allow me to get fresh air and take short walks after work to de-stress.

제안: Avoid filler words and be more precise: give a clear topic sentence naming the park(s) you want to visit and a reason why. Use correct article usage ('Yellowstone National Park' without 'the' is acceptable but be consistent) and combine sentences using linking words to sound fluent.

예시: I would like to visit more national parks in the US in the future, such as Yosemite or Grand Canyon, because I enjoy dramatic landscapes and hiking. I have already been to Yellowstone, so next time I hope to explore a different park with unique scenery.

× We played swings and slides.

✓ We played on the swings and the slides.

The verb 'play' with playground equipment typically uses the preposition 'on' (collocation). Also include the definite article for specific equipment: 'the swings' and 'the slides'. Use plural nouns to match 'we'. Suggestion: learn common collocations: 'play on the swings', 'play on the slide'. Practice sentences using 'on' with playground equipment.

× Sometimes we went to skating.

✓ Sometimes we went skating.

After verbs of motion like 'go', the activity is expressed with the -ing form without a preposition: 'go skating', not 'go to skating'. Remove 'to'. Suggestion: remember patterns: 'go swimming', 'go hiking', 'go skating'.

× We usually play.

✓ We usually played.

The context is past (childhood). 'Usually' can be used with past tense to indicate habitual past actions: 'we usually played'. Using present 'play' creates a tense inconsistency. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame (past experiences → past tense verbs).

× Yes I still like going to parks now but I don't want to play those activities like swings and slides.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now, but I don't want to do those activities like playing on the swings and the slides.

The verb 'play' needs the auxiliary 'do' when negated ('don't want to do...') and the activity should be expressed as 'playing on the swings'. Also add commas for clarity and articles for specific equipment. The original lacked correct verb construction and prepositions. Suggestion: use 'do' + noun/gerund when saying 'don't want to do something' and keep collocations ('play on').

× I just scrolling around the park for relax.

✓ I was just scrolling around the park to relax.

'Scrolling' needs an auxiliary to form a verb phrase in past context: 'I was scrolling'. Also 'for relax' is incorrect; the infinitive 'to relax' expresses purpose. The original lacks auxiliary and uses wrong form for purpose. Suggestion: use past continuous 'I was V-ing' for actions in the past and use 'to + verb' to state purpose.

× I have been to the Yellowstone National Park.

✓ I have been to Yellowstone National Park.

When the official name includes 'National Park' following the specific name, the definite article 'the' is usually omitted: 'Yellowstone National Park'. Using 'the' with this full name is not standard. Suggestion: when referring to named parks, use the official form 'Yellowstone National Park' without 'the'.

× I prefer to go to another National Park next time.

✓ I would prefer to go to another national park next time.

Use 'would prefer' for polite future intention or hypothetical preference. 'National park' should be lowercase unless part of a proper name; 'another' + indefinite noun requires no article. Capitalization of 'national park' is only for proper names. Suggestion: use 'would prefer' for preferences about future plans and keep common nouns lowercase: 'another national park'.