Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, complete response that addresses the question with a topic sentence and one or two brief supporting details. Avoid single-word answers and show a little description or reason.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played on swings and climbed trees with my friends, and I liked the open space because it felt healthy and free.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatical sentence and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas and avoid filler words and repetitions.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise; for example, I often jog there on weekend mornings and sit on a bench to read.

제안: Answer the question directly and stay on topic. If you do not understand a question, politely ask for clarification rather than changing the subject. Then give a clear opinion with one reason.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green space, and more parks would give residents places to exercise and meet neighbors.

제안: Respond directly to the question rather than deflecting. Mention a specific park or type of park you want to visit and explain why, using a linking word to add a detail.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next year because it has a long walking trail and interesting public art, so it would be great for photography and exercise.

× Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, I, I like to going to parks.

✓ Oh yeah, yeah, yeah, I like going to parks.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'going' without the infinitive marker 'to'. The structure 'like to going' is incorrect. Use either 'like to go' (infinitive) or 'like going' (gerund). Suggestion: choose 'I like going to parks' or 'I like to go to parks' depending on emphasis.

× Do you Do you know only about fire?

✓ Do you only know about fire?

This sentence repeats 'Do you' and has incorrect word order for the adverb 'only'. Remove the duplicate auxiliary and place 'only' before the verb phrase it limits. Correct form: 'Do you only know about fire?' If the intended meaning is different (e.g. 'Do you know only about fires?'), ensure pluralization accordingly.

× Aside from parks, can you ask me about different ideas?

✓ Aside from parks, can you ask me about other topics?

The original sentence is awkward for the context: the examiner asked about parks and the student replies asking the examiner to change the topic. 'Different ideas' is vague and not idiomatic here. 'Other topics' is clearer. Also 'can you ask me' is a request and grammatically acceptable, but 'could you ask me about other topics?' is more polite. Suggestion: 'Aside from parks, could you ask me about other topics?'