Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答可以更连贯并包含主题句和清晰的支持细节。注意避免犹豫词（如"uh"）和不完整句子，使用连接词把句子衔接起来，并举具体例子说明在公园做什么（如玩耍或野餐）。长度控制在不超过五句。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My parents would take me to a small park near our house every weekend, where I played on the swings and had picnics with my family. Because the park had many trees, I enjoyed the fresh air and the peaceful atmosphere. Those visits were a highlight of my childhood.

제안: 回答要更准确地使用词汇并去掉口语填充词（如"like"过多、"just"）。先给主题句，再用连接词（such as, also）说明不同时间段在公园做的活动，提供具体频率或感受。控制在五句内。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, I often spend my afternoons at a local park to relax and use the swings, and I also go there in the mornings to run or jog. These visits help me stay active and relieve stress.

제안: 回答需更有条理：先直接回答是或否，然后用具体原因支持（例如空气质量、绿地覆盖率、居民活动空间），并用连接词（because, therefore）串联。避免语法错误（如时态、主谓一致），并完成句子。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. Taichung has heavy traffic near many neighborhoods, so additional parks would improve air quality and provide safe places for residents to exercise and relax. More green spaces could also reduce noise and make the city more pleasant.

제안: 答案需要更清晰地表达意图并用正确语法。先明确回答（有或没有），然后给出具体目标或回忆细节，例如想去的游乐园名字或希望体验的游乐项目。避免碎片化语句和语法错误。

예시: I don't have a particular local park in mind, but I would love to visit an amusement park in the future. When I was a child I went to one once and enjoyed the roller coasters and games, but I can't remember the name. I hope to go again to relive those fun memories.

× Yes, I really like to go to parks.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to parks.

原句使用現在式 (like) 與後文描述童年經驗不一致。題目問「Did you like going to parks as a child?」是過去時，回答應使用過去時態來保持時態一致性，因此改為 "liked going" 或者 "liked to go"。建議：描述過去經驗時統一使用過去時態。

× When I was young, uh, my parents took me to the parks nearby our house every weekend and I. I'd like to enjoy the fresh air over there and also the different.

✓ When I was young, my parents took me to the parks near our house every weekend. I liked enjoying the fresh air there and seeing different things.

原句有斷裂（末尾的 "and I."），且用詞與結構混亂（"the parks nearby our house" 應為 "the parks near our house"；"I'd like to enjoy" 時態與上下文不符）。改為兩個完整句子，使用過去時描述過去習慣，並把不完整片語補全。建議：說過去經驗時把句子說完整，注意介詞搭配並統一時態。

× I still enjoy going to Palms now especially there's like slide or swings in the park.

✓ I still enjoy going to parks now, especially when there are slides or swings in the park.

原句有單複數與時態及連接問題："Palms" 可能為誤寫為 "parks"；"there's like slide or swings" 中 "there's" 為單數縮寫但後接複數名詞，且語法口語化。改為 "there are slides or swings"。建議：注意 there be 結構的數一致（there is -> 單數，there are -> 複數），並使用正規表達。

× I would definitely go there and just spend my afternoon in the park.

✓ I would definitely go there and just spend my afternoons in the park.

原句語法上可理解但與習慣性活動表達不一致：使用單數 "my afternoon" 顯得指單一下午，若表示常態活動應用複數或一般現在式/過去式敘述。改為複數 "afternoons" 表示經常性的行為。建議：描述經常性活動時使用複數或現在簡單時態。

× But also in the morning I also go to the park for running and jogging just.

✓ In the mornings I also go to the park for running and jogging.

原句冗贅（"But also" 和 "also" 重複），語序不自然且末尾多餘 "just"。改為更簡潔的句子並使用複數 "mornings" 表示習慣性活動。建議：避免重複副詞，說習慣時使用複數或一般現在時。

× I definitely like to see more parks in my city because I live in Taichung and around the houses they are mostly just a lot of cars and motorcycles, so even the parks nearby my house is always pollutes by the bad air.

✓ I would definitely like to see more parks in my city because I live in Taichung, and around the houses there are mostly a lot of cars and motorcycles, so even the parks near my house are always polluted by bad air.

原句時態與主謂一致、介詞與被動語態錯誤："I definitely like to see" 改為更自然的 "I would definitely like to see"；"around the houses they are mostly" 主語不明，改為 "there are mostly a lot of cars"；"parks nearby my house is always pollutes" 主謂不一致且被動形式錯誤，應為 "parks ... are always polluted"。建議：注意主語與動詞的一致性，there be 結構正確使用，形成被動語態時用過去分詞。

× So if there are more parks in the city.

✓ So I hope there will be more parks in the city.

原句為不完整句（從句未接主句），且時態不明。根據上下文應表達願望或假設，改為完整句 "I hope there will be more parks"，使用未來時表示願望。建議：避免留下不完整的從句，根據語境使用正確時態並補全主句。

× If you're talking about like normal park then I think it's I'm not really have specific parks I want to go but I would like to go to amusement park in which I visit there when I was child but I will I can't remember the man.

✓ If you mean a normal park, then I don't really have any specific parks I want to go to. But I would like to go to the amusement park that I visited when I was a child, although I can't remember the name.

原句有多處代詞與動詞形式錯誤："it's I'm not really have" 非法結構，應為 "I don't really have"；"amusement park in which I visit there when I was child" 代詞與關係從句用法錯誤，應為 "the amusement park that I visited when I was a child"；"I can't remember the man" 中 "man" 應為 "name"。改寫為兩個清晰句子，使用過去時描述童年經驗。建議：保持句子結構清楚，使用正確的代詞和關係代詞，注意拼寫（name）。