Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ama doğal İngilizce kullanımı ve detay eksik. 'I was going to parks every day' ifadesi zaman uyumu ve doğal kullanım açısından zayıf; bunun yerine 'I used to go to the park every day' ya da 'I went to the park every day' daha uygun. Ayrıca kısa bir neden veya bir anekdot ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirebilirsiniz. Bağlaçlar gerekliyse kullanın (for example, because).

예시: Yes, I used to go to the park every day when I was young because my parents took me there after school. For example, I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family.

제안: Cevap çok kısa ve gerekçesi yüzeysel; 'because I'm a teenager now' ifadesi belirsiz. Neden parkları artık sevmediğinizi daha açık biçimde belirtin (örneğin daha meşgul olduğunuz, farklı ilgi alanlarınız olduğu veya sosyal aktiviteler tercih ettiğiniz gibi). Ayrıca olumlu/olumsuz dengeleyici bir cümle ekleyebilirsiniz. Bağlaçlarla neden-sonuç ilişkisini netleştirin (because, although).

예시: Not as much, because I’m busier now with school and social activities, so I usually prefer meeting friends at cafés or playing sports. However, I still enjoy going to a park occasionally to relax.

제안: Cevap net ama biraz mekanik ve tekrar içeriyor. Daha doğal olmak için 'I don't think so' veya 'I don't feel we need more' gibi ifadeler kullanın ve gerekçeyi genişletin (örneğin mevcut parkların durumu, bakım, çeşitlilik eksikliği veya şehir planlaması). Bir alternatif veya öneri eklemek cevabı güçlendirir. Bağlaçlarla düşüncenizi destekleyin (because, so).

예시: I don’t think we need more parks because the city already has many green spaces and most are well maintained. Instead, I would prefer improving facilities like playgrounds and benches.

제안: Cevapta konuşma dili çok belirgin (wanna) ve dilbilgisi/karmaşa sorunları var ('the pier is most popular thing in the Internet' doğal değil). Daha doğru ve doğal ifadeler kullanın ('I want to visit the Santa Monica Pier next year because it’s very popular online' veya 'because I’ve seen many photos and videos of it'). Ayrıca kısa bir sebep ve beklenti ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla sebebi netleştirin (because, since).

예시: Yes, I want to visit the Santa Monica Pier next year because I’ve seen many photos and videos online showing its rides and ocean views. I’m particularly looking forward to trying the Ferris wheel and walking along the boardwalk.

× Yes, I was going to parks every day.

✓ Yes, I went to parks every day.

The student used past continuous 'was going' which implies an ongoing action at a specific time; for habitual past actions use the simple past 'went'. Suggestion: Use simple past for repeated past habits (I went, I visited).

× No, because I'm a teenager now.

✓ No, because I'm a teenager now.

No grammatical correction needed. The sentence correctly uses present tense to explain a current state. Suggestion: Keep present simple or present continuous for current states (I am a teenager).

× No, we have enough parks in our city.

✓ No, we have enough parks in our city.

No grammatical correction needed. 'Enough parks' is correct for indicating sufficient quantity. Suggestion: Keep 'enough' before the noun to indicate sufficiency.

× Yes, I wanna go to the Santa Monica Pier next year actually, because nowadays the pier is most popular thing in the Internet.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the Santa Monica Pier next year, actually, because the pier is one of the most popular things on the Internet nowadays.

Several issues: 'wanna' is informal spoken contraction; use 'want to' in written/formal replies. Missing article and plural/superlative errors: 'the pier is most popular thing' is incorrect—use 'one of the most popular things' or 'the most popular thing' with 'the'. Also preposition: use 'on the Internet' not 'in the Internet'. Suggestion: Use 'want to' instead of 'wanna', include commas for clarity, use 'one of the most popular things' to compare correctly, and use 'on the Internet'. This combines modal/colloquial usage, plural/comparison, and preposition corrections.