Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct but a bit short and generic. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (a memory, activity, or reason) using a linking word to make it more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I did. I loved going to the park as a child because I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, so it was always a fun weekend routine.

제안: Good: you give a reason. To improve, combine sentences to sound more natural and expand slightly with linking words and a more varied vocabulary (e.g., mention benefits like relaxation or exercise). Avoid unnecessary article errors ("the parks" vs "parks").

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because walking on the soft grass helps me relax and get some gentle exercise, and I often sit under trees to read or watch people.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and is somewhat repetitive. Improve by making the topic sentence concise, correcting grammar, and giving one specific reason or example using a linking word to support your view.

예시: No, I wouldn't. My city already has many well-maintained parks, so I'm satisfied; for example, we have several neighborhood green spaces within walking distance.

제안: Clear response listing places you want to visit. To score higher, add a brief reason for each park and link the ideas with a conjunction to make it more natural and informative.

예시: Yes, I'd love to visit Central Park in New York because of its famous landmarks and lively atmosphere, and Centennial Park in Sydney because I've heard it's great for events and wide open spaces.

× No, the city I live in there a lot of parks already.

✓ No, the city I live in has a lot of parks already.

This sentence contains an unnecessary existential word 'there' and lacks the correct verb for the subject 'the city I live in.' Replace 'there a lot of parks' with 'has a lot of parks' to supply the correct verb and maintain subject-verb relation. Suggestion: use 'has' after the subject to indicate possession ('the city has...').

× Yes, I love going to the parks.

✓ Yes, I love going to parks.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'parks' suggests specific parks already mentioned; in this context the student speaks generally, so no article is needed. Remove 'the' to express a general preference. Suggestion: omit 'the' when talking about things in general ("I love going to parks").

× I like walking on the soft grass.

✓ I like walking on soft grass.

The definite article 'the' makes 'soft grass' sound specific, but the speaker likely means grass in parks generally. Remove 'the' for a general statement. Suggestion: use no article for non-specific uncountable nouns when speaking generally.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you would like to go to in the future?

The original is understandable but in a polite interview context 'would like' is more natural to express desire about future plans. This aligns modality and politeness with expected reply. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite statements about future intentions.

× Yes, I'd like to go to Central Park in New York and I would like to go to Centennial Park in Sydney.

✓ Yes, I'd like to go to Central Park in New York and Centennial Park in Sydney.

Repeating 'I would like to go to' is grammatically acceptable but stylistically repetitive. Combine the two destinations after a single modal phrase to improve fluency. Suggestion: use a single modal clause and list parallel objects ('I'd like to go to A and B').