Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Сформулируйте ответ чётко и грамотно: используйте прошедшее время для описания детских воспоминаний, исправьте лексические и грамматические ошибки, избегайте лишних или непонятных слов. Дайте одну-две дополнительные подробности (например, что вам нравилось в парке или с кем вы ходили), используя связку для плавности (например, "because" или "and").

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went with my family and we would ride small attractions and eat ice cream together, because it was a special treat for us.

제안: Используйте правильные времена и порядок слов: для нынешних привычек используйте Present Simple. Избегайте смешения времен в одном предложении. Добавьте связующее слово для плавности (например, "sometimes" или "often") и одну конкретную деталь о том, что вы делаете в парке.

예시: Yes, I still like going to parks. I often go with my friends and we ride bikes and sometimes have ice cream while relaxing on the grass.

제안: Дайте более развёрнутый и грамматически корректный ответ: используйте модальные глаголы и корректную форму глагола "have". Объясните причину своего мнения конкретно (например, зачем нужны новые парки — для отдыха, спорта или улучшения экологии) и используйте связку (например, "because" или "so").

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because currently there are only two large parks and a few small ones, so additional green spaces would provide more places for exercise and family gatherings.

제안: Говорите ясно и избегайте ошибок с местоимениями и временами. Используйте Present Conditional или Future для желаний о будущем (например, "I'd like to visit" или "I want to visit"). Дайте причину выбора парка и одну конкретную деталь, почему он вам интересен. Используйте связки (например, "because" или "since").

예시: Yes, I would like to visit a park outside my city, such as Disneyland. I'd like to go because it is very popular and has many attractions and shows that look exciting.

× Yes, I like going to Barca as I did children with my family.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child with my family.

The student mixes present and past tenses and incorrect noun 'Barca' and phrase 'did children'. Use past tense 'liked' to match 'as a child', plural 'parks' or 'the park', and correct phrase 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for childhood actions and correct noun forms.'

× We eat ice, we ate ice cream and go to the attraction.

✓ We ate ice cream and went to the attractions.

The sentence inconsistently mixes present 'eat' and past 'ate'. For a past narrative use past tense for all verbs: 'ate' and 'went'. Use plural 'attractions' or 'the attraction' depending on meaning. Suggestion: maintain past tense and correct noun forms.'

× Yes, of course we I with my friend going to the park.

✓ Yes, of course my friends and I go to the park.

Word order and pronoun use are incorrect ('we I with my friend'). Also tense should be present simple 'go' for habitual actions. Use 'my friends and I' or 'my friend and I' and place 'I' last. Suggestion: use correct pronoun order and present simple for routines.'

× We ride a bike and ate ice cream.

✓ We ride bikes and eat ice cream.

The student mixes present 'ride' and past 'ate'. For current habitual activities use present simple for both verbs: 'ride' -> 'ride bikes' and 'eat ice cream'. Also plural 'bikes' is natural. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for routines.'

× Yes, because my city have got two big parks and more mini parks.

✓ Yes, because my city has two big parks and several small parks.

Use singular subject 'my city' with singular verb 'has' not 'have'. 'Have got' is informal; 'has' is correct. 'More mini parks' is unnatural; use 'several small parks'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and natural quantifier choices.'

× Yes, but this is park be not in my city.

✓ Yes, but this park is not in my city.

Incorrect word order and use of 'be'. Use 'this park is not in my city' with correct subject-verb order. Suggestion: use 'this park is' for location statements.'

× This is park Disneyland.

✓ This park is Disneyland.

Incorrect word order: nouns and names need linking verb 'is'. Use 'This park is Disneyland' or 'This is Disneyland park'. Suggestion: place verb 'is' between subject and complement.'

× I wanted to visit E park because he very popular and I mean this is interesting.

✓ I would like to visit that park because it is very popular and I think it is interesting.

Pronoun errors: 'E park' is unclear and 'he' used for a park is incorrect; use 'it'. Tense and modal: 'wanted' suggests past desire; use 'would like' or 'want' for future intent. Also missing 'is' after 'very'. 'I mean' is informal and unclear; use 'I think'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns for objects ('it') and appropriate modal verbs for wishes.