Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise: use past tense consistently and provide a brief reason or memory. Keep to 1–3 sentences. Use a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because my family often had picnics there. For example, I remember feeding ducks and playing on the swings with my siblings.

제안: Use correct verb forms and add a short reason. Start with a clear topic sentence (present simple) and follow with one supporting detail using a linking word.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For instance, I often walk there in the mornings to clear my mind.

제안: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and make the opinion clear with a reason. Use linking words to connect opinion and reason. Avoid unclear fragments.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would improve air quality and provide recreational space for families. For example, new parks could include playgrounds and green walking paths.

제안: Fix grammar and be specific if possible. Give a direct topic sentence (no double negatives) and add a specific example or preference using a linking word to make the answer more informative.

예시: There isn’t a particular park I must visit, but I would like to try the large botanical garden outside the city because it has exotic plants and guided tours. Otherwise, I enjoy visiting any local park for a short walk.

× Yes, I do like going to the park when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple ('I do like') with a past time phrase ('when I was a child'). Use past tense 'liked' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use 'liked' or 'used to like' when referring to past habits.

× I still enjoying going to the park now.

✓ I still enjoy going to the park now.

The verb 'enjoy' needs the base form after the auxiliary structure. 'Still enjoying' is incorrect without an auxiliary (am/are). Use simple present 'I still enjoy' to describe a current habitual action. Alternatively, 'I am still enjoying' if describing a current ongoing experience.

× Yes, I do like to see more packs in my city that's improved the.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city if they are improved.

Multiple issues: 'packs' is a spelling error for 'parks' (vocabulary), and the clause 'that's improved the' is ungrammatical and unclear. The intended meaning fits a conditional or wish about future improvements; use 'I would like to see more parks in my city if they are improved' or 'I would like more parks in my city that are improved.' Also 'do like to see' is unnatural here; 'would like to see' expresses preference.

× Now there are any specific park that I want to go to. I just enjoy any park like in the city.

✓ There isn't any specific park that I want to go to now. I just enjoy any park in the city.

'Now there are any specific park' is incorrect because 'any' with affirmative 'there are' is wrong; a negative is needed: 'there isn't any' or 'there aren't any.' Also 'specific park' must match singular with 'isn't' or use plural 'specific parks.' The second sentence 'I just enjoy any park like in the city' is awkward: use 'I just enjoy any park in the city.'