Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes, I did / No, I didn't), tránh tiếng ồn dừng (uh) và sửa lỗi từ vựng. Thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên và cảm xúc). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and ran around with my friends, which made me very happy. The fresh air and open space were great for relaxing after a long day.

제안: Trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc ngữ pháp. Nêu lý do cụ thể và liên kết ý bằng từ nối như 'because' hoặc 'so'. Thêm một chi tiết cá nhân ngắn về sở thích thay thế (ví dụ: xem phim) để làm rõ ý.

예시: No, I don't go to parks much now because there are fewer green spaces in my city. Instead, I prefer going to the cinema with friends because it is more convenient and comfortable.

제안: Câu trả lời cần chính xác và có cấu trúc tốt: nêu ý chính rồi giải thích ngắn gọn. Tránh những từ không chính xác như 'try on parks' — dùng 'spend time in parks' hoặc 'visit parks'. Dùng thêm lý do cụ thể (sức khỏe, giải trí, không khí trong lành).

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide places for exercise and relaxation. More parks would improve air quality and give families safe spaces to meet and play.

제안: Trả lời cần rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể: nêu một công viên cụ thể hoặc loại công viên bạn muốn thăm và lý do (ví dụ: cảnh đẹp, hoạt động). Dùng cấu trúc đúng như 'I want to go to...' và tránh lặp từ như 'it more beautiful'.

예시: Yes, in the future I would like to visit a large botanical garden because I love seeing flowers and peaceful scenery. A place like that would be relaxing and interesting to explore.

× Yes, I like going to parks at a tube because uh, Impulse is very, uh, happy and eat down. And when go to parks I fury.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I felt very happy and relaxed. And when I went to parks I had fun.

The student mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect verbs and nouns. 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' requires past tense: 'liked'. 'At a tube' is incorrect and unclear, replace with 'as a child' or remove. 'Impulse is very happy and eat down' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I felt very happy and relaxed'. 'When go to parks I fury' should be past: 'when I went to parks I had fun'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for childhood descriptions and choose correct verbs (felt, had fun).

× No, I, uh, don't like going to parks now because, uh, in my city he it not pops And uh, I like a movie. I like going to movie.

✓ No, I don't like going to parks now because in my city there are not many parks. I prefer movies. I like going to the cinema.

The response to 'Do you still like...' requires present tense. 'Don't like' is correct but the student then uses 'he it not pops' which is unintelligible; intended 'there are not many parks' (there be + plural). 'I like a movie' and 'I like going to movie' are ungrammatical; use 'I prefer movies' or 'I like going to the cinema'. Suggestion: use 'there are not many parks' and consistent present simple for habits and preferences.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I'm uh, really like in try on parks.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I really enjoy spending time in parks.

The sentence contains modal 'would like' correctly but the rest is ungrammatical: 'I'm really like in try on parks' mixes forms. Use 'I really enjoy' to express liking and 'spending time in parks' to convey purpose. Suggestion: after 'because' use a clear clause ('I really enjoy spending time in parks').

× Yes, in future I want to be go to parks and uh, I'm really think parks it beautiful. It more beautiful.

✓ Yes, in the future I want to go to parks, and I think parks are really beautiful and very pleasant.

'I want to be go to parks' incorrectly mixes infinitive forms; correct is 'I want to go to parks'. 'I'm really think' should be simple present 'I think'. 'parks it beautiful' wrong subject-verb and article; use plural verb 'parks are beautiful'. 'It more beautiful' is comparative without reference; instead 'very pleasant' or 'more beautiful than...' if comparing. Suggestion: use 'I want to go', 'I think parks are beautiful' and complete comparative constructions if needed.