Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a past-focused, slightly longer answer with a topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use past tense and add a brief reason or memory to make it natural and specific.

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I used to go there every weekend with my parents and we would have picnics by the pond, which I always looked forward to.

제안: Use correct tense and a clearer, more concise structure. Start with a topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are a good place to relax. For example, I often meet my friends there on weekends to chat and play frisbee.

제안: Respond directly and be specific about what you mean by 'more parks'. Use linking words to explain reasons and avoid confusing 'parks' with 'zoo' unless you clarify. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for families. For instance, having small neighborhood parks and a larger park with a zoo or playground would be great.

제안: Answer clearly with correct grammar and a topic sentence naming the place, then give one reason and a small detail. Avoid fragmented speech and filler words. Use future tense or intention phrases like 'I want to' or 'I'd like to visit'.

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit the Parc Zoologique de Paris in France in the future because I enjoy seeing animals and learning about conservation. It would be a nice chance to combine a city trip with visits to interesting parks and gardens.

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

Question asks about past habit 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' so reply should use past tense. Using 'do' (present) is incorrect for a past-time question. Suggestion: match tense of question by using 'did' for past events.

× Yes I do I I went to parks with my friends now.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks. I go to parks with my friends now.

The examiner asked about current preference; 'Yes I do' is fine but the sentence mixes present and past incorrectly and repeats words. 'I went to parks with my friends now' incorrectly uses past tense 'went' with 'now'. Use present simple 'go' for habitual present. Also remove repetition and add proper punctuation.

× Yes I do, I like to see parks in my city like zoo.

✓ Yes, I do. I would like to see more parks in my city, such as zoological gardens.

The original has awkward phrasing 'like zoo' and punctuation issues. 'Like' is incorrectly used to give an example; use 'such as' or 'for example' and use 'zoological gardens' or 'zoos' for clarity. Also 'see parks' is odd; 'see more parks' or 'have more parks' fits the question about wanting more parks.

× Is they wanna go to, uh, Zoo France? It's situated in Paris and uh, that's it.

✓ I want to go to the Parc Zoologique de Paris in France. It's situated in Paris.

The sentence uses incorrect subject 'Is they' and colloquial 'wanna'. Replace with proper pronoun 'I' and formal 'want to'. Provide the park name or 'Parc Zoologique de Paris' and avoid filler words 'uh' and 'that's it'. Also ensure consistency: asking about future desire should use 'want to' or 'would like to'.