Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要完整並自然。可以用一個主題句直接回答，再補充一兩個細節（例如原因或回憶）。注意時態應與過去相符，句子不要過短或片面。可以使用連接詞如“because”來擴展。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had big playgrounds and lots of green space. I often went there with my parents and friends, and we would spend hours playing on the swings and having picnics.

제안: 回答需更具體並自然展開。用一個完整句說明你現在的情況，並給出理由或頻率。使用連接詞如“because”或“so”來連接原因，避免單字回答。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. I usually visit a park once or twice a week to jog or relax with a book.

제안: 注意語法和指代，應該說“in my city”。回答時先表明意見，再給出具體原因和期望。可以使用連接詞如“because”或“so that”來說明好處。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide recreational space for families. More parks would also encourage people to exercise and spend time outdoors.

제안: 回答需要清晰流暢的句子，避免不正確的單詞順序和發音拼寫。先指出具體公園名稱或地點，再說明原因和計劃時間。使用完整句並加上連接詞如“because”或“so”來解釋。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York in the future because it is famous for its landscapes and cultural events. I hope to go there next year and spend a day exploring the paths and museums nearby.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I did.

原句使用現在時態“I like”回應過去式問題“Did you like…?”不一致。面試官問的是過去對公園的喜好，應使用過去式。建議將動詞改為過去式“did”並可保留“Yes”作肯定回答。

× Yes, I like to see more park in your city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

原句中有多處時態和用法問題：1) 問句為一般現在與意願相關，應使用禮貌語氣“would like”或“want to”，而非簡單現在“I like to”。2) “park”應為複數“parks”，因為想看到更多不止一個公園。3) “in your city”與說話者身份不符，應改為“in my city”表示自己所在的城市。建議使用“would like to see more parks in my city”。

× Yay America park into like go to in the future.

✓ I would like to go to America Park in the future.

原句語序混亂且缺乏正確助動詞和介詞結構。正確表達意願和將來計劃需使用“would like to”或“want to”，並將地名置於動詞後作目的地。建議重組為“I would like to go to America Park in the future.”，這樣語法、語序和時態都正確。