Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I liked' not 'I was like'), correct prepositions ('to the park' not 'to going apart'), and avoid redundancy. Keep answers concise (max 4–5 short sentences).

예시: Yes, I liked going to the park occasionally when I was a child. However, I usually stayed at home and spent time with my family because my parents preferred indoor activities. For example, we often played board games or watched TV together on weekends.

제안: Make the response grammatically correct and add a reason or brief detail using linking words. Use present simple for habits and correct infinitive forms. Avoid repetition and split into 2–3 sentences for clarity.

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. I often visit them alone to relax and read, and sometimes I go with my friends or my boyfriend for a walk. Because parks are peaceful, they help me unwind after a busy day.

제안: Be concise and specific: answer directly, then give a concrete example with clear sentences. Remove fillers (uh) and unclear phrases ('not their coffee roasters'). Use linking words like 'for example' to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve residents' wellbeing. For example, I usually visit Justice Shahbuddin Park in Gulshan; it has a pleasant walking path and a small coffee shop where I like to sit and drink coffee.

제안: Correct sentence structure and be specific about the park and reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concrete reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'because of'. Avoid grammatical errors (e.g., 'there is a park I want to visit', 'I haven't been there yet').

예시: Yes, there is a park I want to visit in the future. It is located in Bonani and I haven't been there yet, but I have heard it has large lakes and walking trails, so I want to go to relax and take photos.

× When I was a child I was like to going apart but I most of the time spending time with my family inside house.

✓ When I was a child I liked going to parks, but most of the time I spent time with my family inside the house.

Errors: incorrect use of 'was like to going' (should be 'liked going' — past simple verb, not 'was like' + to + gerund) and 'spending' missing auxiliary and wrong tense. Also 'apart' is incorrect word; 'park(s)' needed and article 'the house'. Suggestion: use past simple 'liked' for habitual past preference, 'spent' for past tense, include articles ('the house'), and use correct noun 'parks'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes I still like to going to parks now I'm adult so I am going to parks by myself and sometimes I going to park with my friends and my boyfriend.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now that I'm an adult, so I go to parks by myself and sometimes I go to a park with my friends and my boyfriend.

Errors: 'like to going' mixes infinitive and gerund — use 'like going' or 'like to go'. 'I'm adult' missing article and connector — use 'I'm an adult' or 'now that I'm an adult'. Incorrect verb forms 'I am going' and 'I going' for habitual present should be simple present 'I go'. Include article 'a' before 'park' when singular. Suggestion: use gerund after 'like', add articles, and use simple present for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

Error: 'I like to see more parks' expresses general liking, but when answering 'Would you like...' the conditional 'would like' is appropriate to express desire. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite requests or desires about preferences. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, normally I am going to Justice Shahbuddin Park in Gulshan.

✓ Normally I usually go to Justice Shahbuddin Park in Gulshan.

Error: 'I am going to' suggests a current action rather than a habitual activity; use simple present 'I go' or 'I usually go'. Also 'uh' filler removed. Suggestion: use adverb 'usually' with simple present to describe regular habits. Grammar problem type ID:6

× The park is really nice.

✓ The park is really nice.

No grammatical error detected relevant to the provided list; sentence is correct as written. (Included for completeness.) Grammar problem type ID:27

× They uh, have a coffee shop inside the park and I like their coffee, which is not their coffee roasters.

✓ There is a coffee shop inside the park and I like its coffee, which is not from their own roastery.

Errors: 'They have' is vague; use 'There is' or 'The park has'. Pronoun agreement: 'their coffee' ambiguous — use 'its coffee' referring to the park or 'the coffee shop's coffee'. 'which is not their coffee roasters' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'which is not from their own roastery'. Suggestion: use 'there is' or 'the park has', correct pronouns, and rephrase to indicate source of coffee. Grammar problem type ID:3

× Yes, there have a part I want to go to in the future.

✓ Yes, there is a park I want to go to in the future.

Errors: 'there have' is incorrect; use 'there is' for singular count noun 'a park'. Also 'part' should be 'park'. Suggestion: use correct 'there is/are' construction and correct noun spelling. Grammar problem type ID:3

× It's actually the park is located. Bonani, I hasn't go yet, but I go there. I want to go there.

✓ It's actually a park located in Banani; I haven't gone there yet, but I want to go there.

Multiple errors: word order and punctuation ('the park is located. Bonani' incorrect), misspelling 'Bonani' -> 'Banani'. 'I hasn't go' mixes auxiliary and main verb incorrectly; correct negative present perfect is 'I haven't gone'. 'I go there' is wrong in context; use 'I want to go there' or remove redundant clause. Suggestion: use present perfect 'haven't gone' for experiences up to now, correct place name and word order. Grammar problem type ID:5