Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, add one or two concise supporting details, use correct grammar (plural 'parks'), and keep the answer natural and within 1–5 sentences. For example, begin: “Yes, I loved going to parks as a child.” Then add a reason or a short specific memory using a linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”).

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I enjoyed playing on the swings and exploring the trees. For example, I often had picnics there with my family on weekends.

제안: Again, the student echoed the examiner rather than answering and used incorrect article/number (“park” instead of “parks”). Improve by giving a direct yes/no topic sentence, then briefly explain current habits or feelings. Use linking words like “but” or “because” to connect ideas and include a specific detail (when or how often).

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax and exercise. For example, I usually go for a jog in the park twice a week.

제안: The student repeated the question instead of stating an opinion. To improve, give a clear opinion sentence (Yes/No/Maybe), then support it with a specific reason and a linking word such as “because” or “so.” Mention one concrete benefit (e.g., green space, recreation) to show relevance.

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because more green spaces would improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. For instance, a new park near my neighborhood would make it easier to go outside without traveling far.

제안: The student asked the question back and made grammatical errors (“are there are there”, singular “park”). Improve by answering directly with a topic sentence naming a specific park or type of park, then give a brief reason and a linking phrase like “because” or “for example.” Keep it concise and correct grammar.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the central botanical garden next year because I have heard it has beautiful themed gardens and rare plants. For example, I want to see their orchid collection and take photos.

× Did you like going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The student omitted the article needed for the countable noun 'park.' When speaking generally about the activity of visiting parks, use the plural 'parks' or 'the park.' Using 'parks' matches the examiner's original meaning. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about visiting places ('going to parks').

× Do you still like going to park?

✓ Do you still like going to parks?

Same issue: 'park' is a countable noun and needs an article or plural form when speaking generally. 'Going to parks' correctly expresses the general activity. Suggestion: use 'parks' or 'the park' depending on whether you mean parks in general or a specific park.

× Are there are there any park you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence has a duplicated phrase 'are there' and a singular 'park' where plural is required for a general question. Remove the duplicate 'are there' and use the plural 'parks' to ask about parks in general. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'Are there any parks...' Suggestion: proofread to avoid accidental repetition and use plural for general plural nouns.