Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Порада: Потрібно давати чітке речення-відповідь і після цього додати 1–2 логічні підтримуючі деталі з правильними часами та граматикою. Уникайте фрагментованих речень і повторів. Використовуйте прості зв'язки (for example, because, so) і правильні минулі форми (liked, went).

예시: No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child. I preferred staying at home because I felt shy around many people. For example, I often stayed in my room and played video games with my friends online.

제안: Порада: Дайте прямий короткий відгук, потім поясніть причину в теперішньому часі або present perfect, не змішуючи часи. Використовуйте звʼязки (because, so) і уникайте зайвих повторів слів (now).

예시: No, I don't really go to parks now because I find them uninteresting. I'm 18 and I usually prefer other activities like studying or dancing, so I rarely visit parks.

제안: Порада: Починайте з чіткої позиції, потім наведіть конкретну причину або приклад. Слідкуйте за узгодженням (there are a lot of parks) і за логікою: якщо у вас є приватний сад, поясніть, як це впливає на вашу думку про парки. Використовуйте зв'язки (however, because, although).

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because public green spaces are important for families and children. However, I live in a private house with a garden, so I don't use them often myself.

제안: Порада: Дайте ясну відповідь (yes/no/maybe) і поясніть умову або обставини коротко й зв’язно. Використовуйте правильні часові форми і уникайте суперечливих фраз (наприклад, 'in free time, yes, of course I won't go' — протиріччя). Краще сказати, що відкладу відвідування через зайнятість, або що піду з друзями, коли матиму вільний час.

예시: Maybe — I would like to visit some parks in the future, but only when I have time or when my friends can join me. Right now I'm very busy with university and dance classes, so I don't plan park visits at the moment.

× No, I don't like go to park when I was be a child.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect verb forms. Use past tense 'didn't like' for childhood and the gerund 'going' after 'like'. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' and correct 'was a child' to 'was a child'. Suggestion: Use consistent past tense and correct verb forms: 'I didn't like going to parks when I was a child.'

× I don't like people around me.

✓ I didn't like having people around me.

The original uses present tense 'don't like' while referring to childhood; change to past 'didn't like'. Also use 'having people around me' to express discomfort with others being present. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with the time frame and use 'having' to show the state.

× I like stay at home, play video game. Being.

✓ I liked staying at home and playing video games.

Use past tense 'liked' to match childhood context. Verbs after 'like' should be in -ing form: 'staying' and 'playing'. Use plural 'video games' and remove stray 'Being'. Suggestion: Use parallel -ing forms: 'liked staying at home and playing video games.'

× No. And now I didn't go into the park.

✓ No. And now I don't go to the park.

The speaker refers to the present, so use present tense 'don't go' not past 'didn't go'. Use 'go to the park' rather than 'go into the park'. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I don't go to the park.'

× I'm 18 years old and and now it's not interesting for me.

✓ I'm 18 years old and now it's not interesting to me.

There is a repeated 'and'. Use 'interesting to me' rather than 'interesting for me' to express personal interest. Suggestion: Remove duplicate word and use correct prepositional phrase: 'interesting to me.'

× Yes, in my city a lot of good parks and playground, but I live in the private house when I have a private garden.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of good parks and playgrounds in my city, but I live in a private house with a private garden.

Missing 'there are' for existence, plural 'playgrounds', and incorrect word order. Use 'in my city' after the clause and 'with a private garden' to indicate possession. 'When' is incorrect here. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for saying something exists and 'with' to show having something.

× Maybe yes, but I need people, my friends.

✓ Maybe, yes, but I need other people, like my friends.

Clarify meaning: likely need company. Add 'other' and 'like' to show examples. Comma after 'Maybe' improves flow. Suggestion: Use words to clarify 'need people' as 'need company' or 'need my friends.'

× But now I haven't a free time.

✓ But now I don't have free time.

English does not use 'haven't' with 'a free time'. Use 'don't have' for possession and 'free time' without an article. Suggestion: Use 'I don't have free time.'

× But now I go to dance, to study, to university and I still really busy.

✓ Now I go to dance classes, study at university, and I'm still really busy.

Use parallel structure and correct verb forms: 'go to dance classes' and 'study at university'. Add the auxiliary 'am' before 'really busy'. Suggestion: Use parallel verbs and include 'am' for adjective 'busy': 'I'm really busy.'

× But in free time, yes, of course I won't go to parks.

✓ But in my free time, yes, of course I will go to parks.

The speaker intends a future/conditional action of going to parks in free time; 'won't' (will not) contradicts 'yes'. Use 'will' to indicate intention. Also add 'my' before 'free time'. Suggestion: Use 'will' for future intentions: 'I will go to parks.'