Parks— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题，没有任何实质内容。按评分标准，这样的回答无法展示语言能力、内容和连贯性。提高方法：用一句主题句直接回答（是/否或部分同意），然后用1–2句具体细节支持，用连接词衔接。例如说明去公园做什么、谁一起去以及当时的感受或原因。注意控制在最多五句内，自然表达。

예시: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there to play on swings and feed the ducks. I usually went with my family on weekends, and those outings felt relaxing and fun. Because of that, parks became my favorite place to spend time as a kid.

제안: 你的回答仍然只是重复问题，没有给出任何信息或观点。改进建议：直接回答（喜欢/不太喜欢/有时喜欢），然后用1–2个具体理由或例子支持，用连接词（for example, because, so）。保持简洁自然，句子不超过五句。

예시: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For example, I often jog there in the mornings and sometimes meet friends for a picnic. This helps me relax after a busy week.

제안: 你重复了问题而没有表达任何观点或理由。改进方法：先给出明确立场（想/不想/没意见），然后用1–2句具体原因和可能的影响支持，用连接词如 because, so, therefore。可以提到健康、环境或社区活动等具体点。控制长度，不啰嗦。

예시: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and encourage people to be active. For instance, more local parks would give families a safe place for children to play and for neighbours to socialise.

제안: 你仅仅重复了考官的问题，没有提供个人计划或具体目标。改进建议：回答时先给出一个简短明确的立场（例如想去某个公园），随后给出具体原因或计划细节（在哪里、什么时候、和谁、做什么）。使用连接词使表达连贯。

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that opened last year because it has walking trails and a botanical garden. I plan to go there next month with my friends to have a picnic and take photos of the scenery.

× Did you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Yes. I liked going to parks when I was a child.

原句学生只是重复了考官的问题，属于句子结构/内容不完整问题。回答应包含完整句子且与时态匹配：因为问题是过去时（Did ... as a child），回答需用过去时（liked）并说明主语。我建议给出肯定或否定并补充信息，例如“when I was a child”来明确时间。

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now.

原句学生只是重复了考官的问题，未作回答。正确回答应使用现在时态（do/like）表达当前喜好。建议在句子中使用主语+动词的陈述句，例如“Yes, I still like going to parks now.”或给出原因。

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

学生再次重复了问题而没有回答。此问题用的是情态动词would，回答时应使用相同的情态结构（I would like to...）。建议完整表达愿望并可补充理由，例如“I would like to see more parks because...”以使回答更自然。

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Yes, there are some parks I want to visit in the future.

学生只重复问题，未提供回答。问题询问将来意向，回答可用现在时表示计划或意愿（I want to visit...），或用将来相关表达（I would like to visit...）。建议使用完整句子并明确具体公园或原因。